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  1. kinglis

    archived-videos Nerf Mortar Battle

    Did you edit the ending? I remember you posting this vid b4. Don't add music, you'll spoil it. :)
  2. kinglis

    archived-videos Snake and Mongoose

    No conflict = boring
  3. kinglis

    archived-videos Trust - Short Thriller

    I can translate it for you :)
  4. kinglis

    story There are only 2 types of stories

    Brian, let's not start... :lol:
  5. kinglis

    story There are only 2 types of stories

    The majority of the best ones, yes :)
  6. kinglis

    archived-videos Trust - Short Thriller

    I didn't enjoy the "view" through the car windows either :)
  7. kinglis

    Getting the talent to go to 'that place.'

    I told you so :lol: What happened?
  8. kinglis

    archived-videos Trust - Short Thriller

    The characters are not convincing. They act like you're hiding behind a tree, telling them what to do. The motivation for their actions is lame. Too many U turns. (Even though, when written well, It's my fav type of story) Probably you don't know your characters very well...
  9. kinglis

    story There are only 2 types of stories

    Theodebernacius is talking about genre... Anyway, I agree with you, even though, we Europeans, find the majority of the US movies, a total waste (of money and soul) :)
  10. kinglis

    Feedback on a 6 page script?

    The story is good. The way you've written it, have kept me reading it... But, if you wanna impress me, get rid of the V. O. and the chatter box :) Why do you need to tell me, when you can show me :)
  11. kinglis

    Feedback on a 6 page script?

    Now, can you write this without V. O. and monologue?
  12. kinglis

    archived-videos Loop

    That's what I thought when I saw yr vid :lol:
  13. kinglis

    story There are only 2 types of stories

    It's the same thing... :)
  14. kinglis

    archived-videos Trust - Short Thriller

    It's all over the place... Not very convincing...
  15. kinglis

    archived-videos Late, but coming up.

    :D :D I don't know what to say, but I liked it. Very eclectic :D
  16. kinglis

    archived-videos 'Toast' short film

    Exactly!
  17. kinglis

    archived-videos Loop

    haha, so fresh!
  18. kinglis

    archived-videos Six Weeks Sober - "Drunk & Fight" music video

    Nah, man... you don't need that... I'm officially addicted to your tune... I made all my friends listen to your song... All of them liked it.
  19. kinglis

    short film about autumn

    It's not a short, but It's my favorite "autumn" scene ever: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p9keMBIyPnA
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