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If you have garageband you can compose an original score with no copyright limitations. That kinda sucks though since anyone who has worked with GB knows the loops you're using and it comes off a little cheap. As for paying a legit composer or even some local musicians, I'm not too sure how...

As firm1 said, I'm not quite sure what its about, but it looks okay. Also the dialog recording doesn't sound that great. You might consider getting a better mic on a boom to get you a better recording on the next one. Overall it looks interesting. Great promotional material too.

A short movie with a budget. If I win powerball tomorrow, a feature with a budget.

Yeah, beyond getting a decent following on youtube and monotizing your account, there's not much profit in short films. I'd say make them because you enjoy making them and maybe something good will come of it.

Nice little short.

Thank you, sir.

That may have been better but what alcoholic wastes booze? I saw it as a last hurrah

Yeah I thought about that too. Good criticism. I suppose the eyes and falling into mud may have indicated that the character is struggling with something but you're right. I should have had a scene of excessive drinking and masturbation. Lol

This is ridiculous. You can't change TV channels with a spray paint can. It totally took me out of the movie.

Cool. I like seeing sweet thangs melt.

You make some good points, but an attempt at immortality shouldnt be easy. :) if I'm a suicide bomber and I fill my vest with fireworks instead of c4, do I really love Allah? On the same token, if I don't almost die making my short, do I really love film?

I disagree. The short film will be around much longer than you will be.

lol I have to say, he does seem like a monster. Who would beat up such a lovely girl?

Cool short. That opening crane shot looked really professional. I hope you get around to adding to it. I know it's a bitch when you have a job and only weekends to devote the time to your movie. Perhaps I failed in delivering that as clearly as I wanted to but that's what I was going...

Also let me know if you'd like me to take a look at some of your work.

Thanks sfoster for giving it a chance. I'd hate to start getting into my motivations for certain scenes because I don't want to ruin someone else's chance at interpreting it. Thanks for watching and for the feedback.

That's fine. I just want honest opinions. Its 11 minutes long. Thanks if you do decide to watch. Its in my first post.

Would anyone here care to critique my short and possibly crush my dreams?

Very scary. I liked it.

I enjoyed it. Maybe it's cliche as I made a short not too dissimilar that was a cross breed between the daily grind cliche and the found footage cliche. I also did a close up on teeth brushing. lol I thought you did it in a interesting way though. You should keep making stuff.