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No. 1 prob - DON'T look into the lens!

EXT. WOODS (MOVING) - NIGHT John and Jill run along a road which winds up a slight incline. The full moon illuminates a large lake off in the distance. John peels off to the right, hops over a fallen log, goes through an opening and hurdles a picket fence. Jill stops short of the hurdle...

Routine. I use to work a job (hated it!) 10am - 6.30pm BUT straight after go to starbucks until 9 - 10pm mon-fri then 9am'ish to 5-6pm sat and 9-30am'ish - 4-5pm'ish sun = 30 hrs minimum a week for years! Plus watching movies, reading etc... IF you want to learn BUTT in chair - all the best, Jim.

MDM why not reshedule, try and raise some additional money to pay your main players? It sounds like they need to commit to a tough training requime as well the shoot itself and I truly believe a little cash goes a long way... All the very best, Jim.

As the old saying goes: "Ideas are Ten a Penny" - hence the lack of anyone taking you up on your offer. So you can either carry on in the hope of finding someone in the same boat willing to join forces or do what most do and write it yourself - unless of course you can throw some money at it...

:hmm:I'm spiritually in LA - does that count...:blush: Jim:cool:;)

Unless they change their name...

Writing IS re-writing. I've written a first draft as quick as a week from a waking dream without any research etc. BUT have spent the past six months re-writing it. And have some started which are still incomplete... I've also spent months researching before writing a word. I've always...

Hi TRB, why not post a link to your showreel, there's always someone shooting - it might get you a gig! All the very best, Jim.

"idk how will this be possible i am in New York and you in Ohio ... and if we will be making any money the question is how and how much are we talking abut here??? " Which is why i don't get involved - before even one word is written...;)

Did she jump to a paying gig? If so can you not pay her? Or as Rik says maybe its a case of rescheduling so she is available and lock her down - guilt trip/payment whatever.m. All the best, Ji

Okay I tried very hard to read BUT a sp isn't a book - there are so many huge blocks of description and 'speeches' that I had to give up... sorry If you must put long blocks in then try and break them up into bit sized pieces, 3-4 lines. There is an enormous amount of flashbacks which not...

The bullet shot 'below the belt' is easier...

"about 20 pounds which is roughly 13 dollars" 20GBPs = $32 (@1.60)

"get a producer attached" - in the UK to get govt film funding you need a 'recognized' producer attached as they want to make sure of an end product. I thought maybe the Canadian system is the same - hence the comment. I'd love access to the 15 million pounds available in the UK BUT in order...

Before actors Hunt for persons to collaberate with - a serious camera/sound/writer.= - form alliances/partnerships - then get some actors to fulfil your vision to a serious level. I wish you all the best - respectfully Jim.

Paid?

S, there are just too many wryly's, not enough conflict - the relevance of their collage backstory - can't been seen, or even heard through dialogue. Plus it feels stagnant - add some movement, maybe get them outside... maybe a garden or something. It reads like a first draft, please don't...

Hmmm, so you won't get a producer to oversee your project so that you get access to said 'funds'? Which seems a big part of their criteria... It may not work that way in Wall Street but if that's the way the game is played in order to get an opportuinty than why not get said producewr involved...

@In every job I've worked I had to bring my own, and no one I know has a job where it is expected for the boss to arrange food for everyone.@ BUT you get a wage no? Feed the free help - no food no energy. Or put it this way you want people to give up there free time AND have them pay for...