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SECTION OF THE RULES The script may not contain any of the following: * Explicit language, the word “fuck” used in a sexual context, any nudity, explicit drug use, extreme violence (murder, rape, etc.), and/or any explicit sexual content or sexual situations. >>>>>>Well that about...

Errrmmm..."HISTORY" is the tag when the contest has closed, the Festival has finished and the record has been sent into archive.

Consider... - Carmel IFF Script Contest GUARANTEES every applicant freeback - Carmel IFF is not supposed to open until October. - Their script contest does not close for entries until August - Earlybird closing date was March 1 Now consider.... - I entered in February - My entry has already...

YEP, Steal it is.... They steal your $350.

The online SRIPT magazine is really good. Its articles remind you of what you need to do to ensure its going to end up well!

Seemed to be one long, dreary conversation. Found nothing funny. Maybe its a cultural thing, but it seems little different to all those crappy American unfunny comedies like "Friends". Seems pretty talentless. Additionally, it is riddled with... - Missing commas. - Spelling errors like thru...

Nowhere near as good as your previous. The violence at the end is too "on the nose" - the simple twist works far better. Likewise, the drugs makes it sleasy and diminishes Alice whereas previously, she seems like the victim until the end by simply evading tax.

I am unconvinced that "are at" is strictly bad English. As I remember, it is archaic outside ot the North of England. I also found it to be rather "Orphan Black".

I got to page 6 before I had to quit. TEDIOUS! One of the most boring things in the world is watching someone else play a video game and reading someone describing a board game is little better. As an opening, it is hard ot imagine it more geared and begging ot go in the readers trash bin. I...

(Have borrowed a friends computer to read it!) - Why all the CUT TO transitions - Page 3 - who - not capitalised - I m not sure what I m digesting - sounds sort of stilted, a curious choice if you are trying not to make her sound alien. - Get used outside of dialogue - poor diction - TYRE IS...

Requires a modern browser that needs a more advanced operating system than I have. NOT READABLE.

Masterful! (Critique - Maybe "Ow My ass!" might sound a tad more natural) I really think this might pan out for you! (And this from the perons who is being slated and hammered in numerous threads for being too hard on writers!) :)

Dearest Diamondwind, you have my own screenplay. I expect to "get it in the neck" just as much as I gave it. The only response that I fewel would be unfair to my screenplay would be... no response... so you reading and comments would be most urgently delightfully received, not matter how vbald...

What's the best way to help an aspiring screenwriter? Answer: Give him a full $2 tip if he remembers to ask you "Would you like fries with that, sir?"

- Description is supposed to be OBJECTIVE... There is NO WE. "We see" should be dumped as should "we hear". - Why waste space telling the reader that there are Vvoiceovers when he can see them. - It's ... not .. Good start, just needs a clean up.

You said "don't be afraid" so ZERO for having an unreadable file format.

You're welcome. My pleasure.

Regarding FantasySciFi, sadly this colonial kid seems to be somewhat of primadonna who tends to throw his toys around his crib everytime he can't get his way.

I do disagree with FantasySciFi. I have endeavoured to challenge rrather than give you brand new ideas and ask for credfit. You will get NOWHERE as a writer if you simply use others ideas (even though most of what FantasySciFi said I had already thought of myself) You need to develop the...

Might it make it easier if you have names which reverse in spelling?