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Good. Thanks. No, I don't know her. Just got curious. And enthusiastic, since your short is pretty funny. Also interesting that you completely skip the first act.
You stand on the start-line with your brand new bicycle, thinking this will be easy. You're about to race a guy with a huge belly and you've tested your new bicycle and it's the best you ever had. As you glance over at your opponent you see that he only has one tiny pedal on his, so you tell...
Next time, cast yourself immediately, if you ask me. You've got a strong visual sense that is great. You could, as exercise, cut a couple of minutes. A trained eye immediately sees exactly what needs to go.
The Various project is very interesting.
I instantly recognized the style - from The Fearless Vampire Killers, which is a very slow movie, even if the trailer is fast:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F8Ciz1G_Zm0
Thought I'd read the first page and am glad I did. Pretty good. I'd say it's very readable, even if you yet seem to look for a certain routine how to describe things. I did not notice it's a funny movie.
You're really bringing the goods in this. Don't know how this would work for you:
A teenager goes with his Borderline Personality Disorder diagnosed mother, to save her from the worst trouble, as she takes on a cross-country journey to hopefully reunite with her past lover.
Four writers are credited for screenplay on Iron Man. Means they had several drafts before starting shooting. What Jeff Bridges says can only mean that they were still tweaking on the final draft when he sat in his trailer.
You're right, Mike. The character's personality different and it's a completely different adventure. But the big thrill is gone, developing it, when the idea isn't as one of a kind unique anymore. So, you continue with something that excites you even more.
At the end of the day, ideas are...
Films like this have a value. It is a journey into the mind of its maker. One can use symbolism as hints. Here's my psycho analysis.
The blinking shows how the maker is in search for a connection... encounters the white ball. Is that the one from James Bond or a zero? A light in the tunnel? Is...
I came up with the American Idol concept when I worked for TV and even pitched it to the big boss. He said it'd cost too much to produce. This was in 1991. I always thought it had potential.
Then I came up with teddybears that would only pretend to not be alive. Developed it, until I saw...
Reads well enough for me to continue reading.
My first impression is that this kind of stuff will get a German audience to laugh. Giving it a second thought, - it's not truly a horror story, more a comedy-. You might want to develop it a bit further to get away from the middle ground. Now the...
This I mean.
People check this singer out. You watch Swedish crime movies, you've seen him act. But heard him sing?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h_vYq1VAh3c
He says he wants more creative freedom, but what he really is saying is that he needs your help to find motivation to handle his part of the deal. He hints how.