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  1. Filman

    archived-videos Production Value - Comedy Short

    Good. Thanks. No, I don't know her. Just got curious. And enthusiastic, since your short is pretty funny. Also interesting that you completely skip the first act.
  2. Filman

    archived-videos Production Value - Comedy Short

    Hi yourself. What did Brittni Evans want?
  3. Filman

    cinematography Birds eye camera view straight down from roof to floor

    Why don't you shoot this in the bedroom and use your girlfriend's dance pole? :-)
  4. Filman

    archived-videos Vfx short with animation

    Well cut and good sense of motion. Very good.
  5. Filman

    Using a famous film speech - Permission required?

    You forgot to thank Quality. His tone too relaxed? - he's from the Caribbean.
  6. Filman

    archived-videos Urban clothing promo

    I dislike the first image enough to quit watching right there.
  7. Filman

    Writers Block

    You stand on the start-line with your brand new bicycle, thinking this will be easy. You're about to race a guy with a huge belly and you've tested your new bicycle and it's the best you ever had. As you glance over at your opponent you see that he only has one tiny pedal on his, so you tell...
  8. Filman

    archived-videos Dead Meat - 48Hour

    Hi Fred. Good timing. I've lately been wanting to check how you are doing, but forgot your name, so I couldn't. Looking very productive. Great.
  9. Filman

    archived-videos Justice Fists of Fury -- a 48HFP

    Really? So, that's what pulled me out of the story? I recall it looked good, and therefore felt surprisingly wrong.
  10. Filman

    archived-videos PIZZA BOY

    Next time, cast yourself immediately, if you ask me. You've got a strong visual sense that is great. You could, as exercise, cut a couple of minutes. A trained eye immediately sees exactly what needs to go. The Various project is very interesting.
  11. Filman

    archived-videos The Flesh Eating Horrors Trailer

    I instantly recognized the style - from The Fearless Vampire Killers, which is a very slow movie, even if the trailer is fast: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F8Ciz1G_Zm0
  12. Filman

    Multiplex by Sean Whelan

    Thought I'd read the first page and am glad I did. Pretty good. I'd say it's very readable, even if you yet seem to look for a certain routine how to describe things. I did not notice it's a funny movie.
  13. Filman

    logline Logline feedback

    You're really bringing the goods in this. Don't know how this would work for you: A teenager goes with his Borderline Personality Disorder diagnosed mother, to save her from the worst trouble, as she takes on a cross-country journey to hopefully reunite with her past lover.
  14. Filman

    Why You Don’t Always Need a Screenplay to Make a Great Film

    Four writers are credited for screenplay on Iron Man. Means they had several drafts before starting shooting. What Jeff Bridges says can only mean that they were still tweaking on the final draft when he sat in his trailer.
  15. Filman

    NNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! My idea, no longer my idea.

    You're right, Mike. The character's personality different and it's a completely different adventure. But the big thrill is gone, developing it, when the idea isn't as one of a kind unique anymore. So, you continue with something that excites you even more. At the end of the day, ideas are...
  16. Filman

    archived-videos MY FIRST ACCOMPLISHMENT

    Films like this have a value. It is a journey into the mind of its maker. One can use symbolism as hints. Here's my psycho analysis. The blinking shows how the maker is in search for a connection... encounters the white ball. Is that the one from James Bond or a zero? A light in the tunnel? Is...
  17. Filman

    NNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! My idea, no longer my idea.

    I came up with the American Idol concept when I worked for TV and even pitched it to the big boss. He said it'd cost too much to produce. This was in 1991. I always thought it had potential. Then I came up with teddybears that would only pretend to not be alive. Developed it, until I saw...
  18. Filman

    Teenage Screenwriter in Need of Feedback?

    Reads well enough for me to continue reading. My first impression is that this kind of stuff will get a German audience to laugh. Giving it a second thought, - it's not truly a horror story, more a comedy-. You might want to develop it a bit further to get away from the middle ground. Now the...
  19. Filman

    archived-videos Skeemin' on a dig site - Cinematic film

    This I mean. People check this singer out. You watch Swedish crime movies, you've seen him act. But heard him sing? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h_vYq1VAh3c
  20. Filman

    Directors role vs DP's role

    He says he wants more creative freedom, but what he really is saying is that he needs your help to find motivation to handle his part of the deal. He hints how.
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