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Sensual use of dialogue. Works to your favor. One feel it coming and it comes amazingly. -the three words, I mean.

You guys sure know how to use a camera and a snake.

He could end his with a salute and later someone must get it said that he found that not at all suitable for what the performance stood for.

Dramatic stuff in a psychiatry's office, is always intriguing. Good on you.

True, I was very brief. Was counting on that the rest of the brilliant people here would comment some more, hopefully positively. I don't like drugs, or what they do to people. All swimming with the stream in that world is for losers only. Just my opinion in general. Can't comment on your film...

XX, you haven't made your trailer available to download. I would had made a re-cut with a voice over to demonstrate how to hook the viewer. What you now are revealing here off screen is very interesting.

Yep, looks terrific. Timing is good. It's too mysterious to promise a good film.

It's the cliffhanger. Last superimpose: "always carry your library card". Cool somehow.

He-he. You know how to use music. And what library cards are good for is seen in this movie.

Thanks but the opening shot is too weak, made me take a u-turn.

You make a lot of sense Inarius. But, but, but. Here's where you go wrong - on the most deciding factor. You don't have to spend SOOO much money. It's the other way around. People will send trucks loaded with cash to your door and empty it in your garage and when that is full they'll shovel the...

"Okay, it's my room mate's diary" is my favorite. Would be funny with the original sounds, too.

Well, if taking criticism isn't your strong suite. Two years in therapy and now the shrink came up with the solution: thank the guy and move on.

The reason is that he's thinking like a director. Wants to make sure you get the point. That's a good sign. Flipped through the pages. You're good with details. If I was involved as the editor I'd make it my mission to cut two and half pages of the first five. So there you have it.

Your inner voice is absolutely right. You don't do these sort of abusive choices. You don't have to. Choice 4. You use the conflict and disguise it with caution. Then your mother will get the optimal reaction: She'll feel that she belongs to the target audience because she can relate so well...

Excellent logline. Can be good.

When will the next 48 be up? A thread here I mean.

Trained movie maker brain shining throughout this thread, I must say.

Right you are, of course. If you want your work in front of the public you write for a newspaper.

Talking about derogatory fashion? Go to 51:55 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8uFa1KWsdRs