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  1. Filman

    archived-videos Would appreciate feedback, please

    I find the acting excellent.
  2. Filman

    Help me understand this Masters Application please

    The most clever ones ask for good advice beforehand.
  3. Filman

    archived-videos Would appreciate feedback, please

    Yes, it sure has its moments. I think it needs two corrections. Cut the opening scene and have her dance to a song with the chorus "I wouldn't do that if I were you".
  4. Filman

    Help me understand this Masters Application please

    It doesn't really seem like a perfect fit to document your own life here. Make something that the TV would buy from you. Something for one of the shows you watch.
  5. Filman

    Reworking an old project

    You have the injured family stranded. The kids are tied to the car, while the Zombies attack. It ends with daddy being dragged into the forest. Why not have daddy unconscious during the whole scene?
  6. Filman

    archived-videos fMy submission to the FilmRiot/Filmstro '1 Minute Film Challenge'- FIBERS (short ver)

    Oh, and indietalk, watch out for my first post, as it contains a spoiler.
  7. Filman

    archived-videos fMy submission to the FilmRiot/Filmstro '1 Minute Film Challenge'- FIBERS (short ver)

    Couldn't help but noticing that among the pleasant looking footage there's a guy who hangs himself.
  8. Filman

    archived-videos New Comedy Sketch - Astronaut Todd

    Overall very happy with this one, guys.
  9. Filman

    Newbie Question

    It doesn't have to cost a single penny if you own a camcorder, but at the same time, what noobs need to be reminded of is that they who are good at making movies, are a hundred times better at it than what it appears. If you want to make a movie without an impressive budget, you'd have to bring...
  10. Filman

    archived-videos "Trivial Ambition" A Short Film

    Luke Hopkins, eh? Thanks for letting me know.
  11. Filman

    archived-videos THE HOST - horror short film

    Long dark corridor and light at the end of it. Exceptionally beautiful. Hmm, beauty in horror. Good start, boys.
  12. Filman

    archived-videos Dark Web (short film)

    Good atmosphere. Very good, actually.
  13. Filman

    story In need of a story

    Nice. Takes a gentleman to come back and let us know how the final storyline looks like. Good job.
  14. Filman

    archived-videos Video Cop episode 1: Terminator Commando

    I love that you dare to jump from one genre to the next, so I couldn't keep myself from watching the western already yesterday. Third is a horror. When will that be out?
  15. Filman

    story In need of a story

    The robot could be standing bored like a security guy in the mall, doing its duty, restricted to sucking up crap from the floor when someone drops something. But it is a robot that is a bit more clever and clearly, from the body language we can tell that he feels overqualified. He uses an...
  16. Filman

    archived-videos Video Cop episode 1: Terminator Commando

    Very energetic. My favorite part is that you're making more.
  17. Filman

    archived-videos Creating A Director's Vision (and other tutorials)

    Pretty good video, considering where you're not from and who you're not.
  18. Filman

    Which of these ideas is true?

    It goes like this: You're a finalist in one of the big contests, so someone options your script because if not someone else does. They pay a writer with a great voice, but otherwise too modest to sell his own scripts. He rewrites your script with great potential, but he isn't good with substance...
  19. Filman

    archived-videos 'Social Neglect' Crit please?

    Yup, when you get to the confrontation the tempo is awesome. Differently? Cut the first two shots out.
  20. Filman

    archived-videos First Teaser for "1st & Main: the Runaway"

    A theme with excellent potential and the teaser takes us right there. But you've still got time to screw this up, don't you? :-)
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