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I enjoyed how you introduced Marissa's character. I learned a lot from both the dialogue and a few simple visual images. Kudos. Altogether it works well but I can't see the big picture and I would need to understand the complete plot line before I can make any story criticism. My only...

The story is entertaining, simple, fun and targeted towards a family market. The only reason this film will be costly is because of the fact that it is animation. I think every filmmaker likes to think their film is destined for some type of greatness but I wrote that in the headline because I...

I think to achieve a quality film then a minimum budget of 20,000 is needed. Of course I can have all the money in the world but it would make no difference without a cohesive, talented, enthusiastic team of individuals and people are always more valuable than money. I'd like to restate that I...

I have a screenplay that I am very proud of but it is my wish to develop the story into a colorful, fun, fast paced animated short. Story is key! And my screenplay adheres to every principle Syd Field has ever preached but a screenplay is quite worthless without a team of talented individuals...

Use V.O. O.S. is used for when a character is speaking in a scene but they are OUT OF FRAME.

I would suggest you open a blank Word document and just start writing. Don't worry about format; just write. Write everything you see in each scene and let your characters wander through the blank pages of your imagination.

Sounds very cliche, but then again aren't all movies in one way or another? Most of those films rely on one thing; good characters. Make sure you care about your characters before you write because if you don't, then the audience/reader won't care either.

Celtx How can you pass up the price?

The audience is my biggest inspiration. I want to make them laugh, make them cry, make them come back for more.

First, you need a good screenplay. Your film will most likely be short and low budget so stick to one character and their singular conflict. ACT 1.) Introduce the character. The audience wants to know who the protagonist is. Make it simple and pithy. ACT 2.) The problem. What does your...

Every scene in your film should have significance to either the story or character. Ask yourself, does adding flashbacks help tell the story? If so, write your heart out. If not, cut it. I would personally suggest making your flashback scenes be especially significant adding more depth to the...

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I have a story for an interactive children's book, but I need help on designing how to correspond multi-touch movements with animation. I am no technical expert but my guess would be that there is some other program or piece of software that might create this effect and easily be imported into...

Just finished another short screenplay inspired by the Twilight Zone. If you'd like to give it a read and provide feedback then please send a private message or post your email address and I will be sure to shoot the script your way. Logline: Carol Wallace, a gold digging, selfish, and terrible...

I have a screenplay based around the idea of boy meets girl. If you'd like to know more then shoot me a private message with your email address and I can send you the script.

What is your short film about? Did you write it?

I just finished a short screenplay inspired by the Twilight Zone. Here is a short intro to the story. The Man with No Escape Our story begins with Kurt Larson, an ex-convict and dubious drifter. Kurt has made the score of a lifetime and now must flee the country. What he doesn't realize is...

First of all you have the perfect screenwriter name: Angel Park. My suggestion will hopefully be helpful to bettering your already well-written screenplay. EXT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - LATE AFTERNOON It’s a building that has seen better days. Through one it’s CRACKED WINDOWS we can catch a...

I like the idea of two people waking in a locked room with no memory; this premise almost certainly creates an excellent dramatic situation. My suggestion would be to choose carefully when your characters share in a laugh because I felt the characters A.) laughed too much and B.) when the...

The trailer told me nothing about the story. What's the film about?