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    thoughts on this teaser I filmed?

    thanks. It's meant for kids to see so I don't know if maybe that's why its boring. My brother and I were already bashing it saying its garbage lmao and time to move onto the next project
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    thoughts on this teaser I filmed?

    I'll admit right off the bat, lighting is garbage, camera work could have been better. What do you think of it as a whole piece (writing, etc)? Is it a little entertaining? It was made for this facebook group: https://www.facebook.com/GetOnMyLvlGaming
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    1st Draft - Any and all feedback is welcome… even the crazy stuff.

    goodness christ, I'd rather fund my own shoot with credit cards than give it to a production company that can't open a script. Everyone uses firefox these days, everyone uses adblocker, follow the trends.
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    archived-videos Selfie [short - Drama].

    It was made very nicely. For me, I could easily press the back button within 30 seconds. It might just not be my type of film but there is a guideline when you're making pop songs that you have 7 seconds or less to catch the listeners attention before they move onto the next song. For film it...
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    Teen Screenwriters

    it was destiny i think
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    Help with film and procrastination?

    Yeah I guess outlining would be the most difficult part. It's hard to not be a perfectionist at this stage. I know you can't settle for the first ideas that come to mind for scenes, plots, etc. So I guess thats what creates so much procrastination, but I also know since im beginning I have to...
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    Help with film and procrastination?

    Does anyone else have a problem with procrastination when it comes to film making? I have so much time on my hands and I know results could come faster if I just put the hours in but I have a hard time doing it. Do you ever go through this? I'd say scriptwriting and coming up with ideas is...
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    tv-writing Feedback wanted on Pilot script

    i'm not a professional or anything but I think maybe you should describe the atmosphere before the beeping. I also don't think you should write "THE EARTH" out of the blue like that. Maybe something tryhard like "A planet floats static among the stars, inhabiting 7 billion people: PLANET EARTH"...
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    tv-writing Feedback wanted on Pilot script

    *Kevin O' Leary* you need to ask permission to view the script.. I'm out.
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    opinions needed screenplay linked

    Hey bro, I really like that scene heading, youre right it does add flavor to it. Something about 1:26AM adds some dark undertone to it. to op: whos ur target audience? young people don't like mini-vans nor ducks and parks. replace mini-van with 2006 black mustang GT and park+ducks with...
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    Oscars are getting obsolete.

    I think the only thing that will ever hurt movies are fully invented virtual reality machines.
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    Is this good copy to sell our movie idea?

    "Minimum words, maximum impact" I think that applies to us no-names, no one wants to put in the energy reading a paragraph when they have no idea if the content is good or not. I think you should make it 1 sentence, 2 sentences max and then let the content do the rest of the talking. btw im an...
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    How to get past road blocks

    hey bro, this guy covers exactly what your problem is and i'm going through it right now, his advice is gold and he even mentions what you say "analysis paralysis" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=abRwbTuwfvw
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    Dealing With Criticism of Your Work

    I think we should brace ourselves for "this is stupid" "this is garbage". If a guy has only been learning guitar for 1 year and he tries his own solo (or whatever) people are probably going to say this sucks since the competition are guys who have been practicing all their life, etc. They're...
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    how cautious should you be of telling people your ideas?

    reason im asking is because I'm trying to create a teen mystery horror drama type pilot and I would like to know if my idea is idiotic or not but at the same time I dont want to hand it out
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    how cautious should you be of telling people your ideas?

    I had an idea that I posted on this forum and I saw a couple people looking very interested in it, I think they might want to write it themselves. The concept was about a pile of spaghetti who finds a magic cowboy hat in grandma and grandpas attic, which turns him into a snowman. He has to...
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    Want to make movie, need help

    The guy who wrote whiplash had two producers but they didn't have enough to turn it into a feature so they created a short film of it instead (but they already had JK Simmons for the short), they showed it at sundance and then it was turned into a feature. So it looks like shortfilms are the...
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    synopsis Western synopsis wanted!

    I think you should make an animated pixar style movie instead and do a plate of speghetti finds a magic cowboy hat in mom n pop's attic.
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