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People have told you what to do already but you ignore them. And pick one story, please don't keep changing them. ADHD is no excuse for continuously ignoring advice. Introduction: introduce conflict, and enough backgroud information to understand the story. Rising action: place obstacles in...

Hmm, I think your descriptions are great. Although if someone else directs it will give very little creative control.

I think your trolling. And You've been told numerous times that your stories lack structure. Your teacher even told you, so why do keep changing stories when your story's "incoherence" is due to lack of structure and not the story itself? Problem: lack of structure. Solution: create or follow...

I dont understand 3 with 3A. It just seems like random events with no real meaning or purpose behind them. hmmmmm. Edit: I just read the whole thread and I agree with your teacher.

Hmm, I thought you could register it at a writers guild. And don't mail it to yourself.

Leon, Zombies, and agent for the president, this sounds like Resident Evil 4 lol. I recommend changing his name.

I read Japanese comics. But I have read some American comics like Daredevil and Kick-Ass.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/23_enigma Interpreting abstract concepts and categorizing them can be difficult. If you try hard enough you can group everything into one list.

It's also very difficult to believe someone would just give $300,000 to gamble with. Aside from the fact that the man knows nothing about filmmaking lol. And on top of that he's accepting more filmmakers? And he had other offers in the past which supposedly turned out to be "bogus". This just...

pretty good, but the lighting was terrible. There was no contrast, everything was exposed.

I don't make movies, but I guess I like watching them.

It could serve as a writers note. Is the note necessary? Debatable, but is it useful? Yes. It makes it read a lot better IMO.

Aside from making the movie uninteresting; if McClane shot at them without warning or without trying to make them surrender first, then he would probably be less likable, and villain-like. Sometimes it's acceptable, and sometimes it isn't. It depends.

I disagree with kinglis. I think you did a good job conveying his marital status visually. ex: The photograph, the contact name, a visual cue in the house, and his motorcycle.

When I think of a main street I think about an empty street, then you said there was a house, so now there's probably a few houses on the street. He's outside his wife's house, probably still married because his bike is still there, and he's obviously been there for a while without her calling...

They didn't have much money when they first started. I can tell you that much right now. It was basically a few tube televisions with small pools of money, started by 2 guys in there house.

I wonder how MLG did it then. (Major League Gaming)

Vote to change thread title to SinEater vs Harmonic. Ugh, finally showed my true colors.

Why create something you don't want people to see? I understand you don't like the music, but I don't see how that's going impact you now, or in the future. It actually doesn't make much sense to be honest.

Compare this shot: I think the lighting is very natural, and the noise gives it a very old look.