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    critique Some ideas for my mystery web series - please, critique them!

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    critique Some ideas for my mystery web series - please, critique them!

    "The Hive" or "Blood Honey"
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    Hello World!

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    Composer from India

    :hi:
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    cinematography 'American Horror Story' Steadicam shot

    American Horror Story Coven - Spaulding cuts out his tongue. Watch the whole sequence. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pdl1_bZooJw
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    Feedback on first 10 pages please.

    That'd be great and I'd really appreciate it. I have really thick skin so feel free to be brutally honest if it merits it. I'm in the middle of rewriting the other 128 pages (was at 140, is down to 138 after rewriting those first 10) and hope to at least get it below 120 if not around 100-110.
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    How the Writers of "A Quiet Place" Broke Almost Every Screenwriting Convention

    Thanks for that overview. Interesting and creative.
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    Feedback on first 10 pages please.

    Sorry to bump this but I went and re-wrote the first 10 based on the suggestions above and many others. If you would like to read the new 10 and give any feeback, it would all be greatly appreciated. https://drive.google.com/open?id=1kZJ3UzcIXgfqb4XgIgouSb3OSDw_b2VT Thanks in advance!
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    movies What's the last film you watched? And rate it!

    Jumanji 2 6/10 Was aight. My teenagers liked it. Wife chuckled a few times.
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    Is Final Draft so good like everyone tells?

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    Is Final Draft so good like everyone tells?

    Just an update on Celtx. Their "free" version keeps getting "trimmed" of features. Now the ability to BOLD, Italics or underline has been removed from their "free" version and made premium. I hate Celtx but use it as I'm working on it with a co-writer who uses it. I would recommend Fade In or...
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    Zach Zoller

    Welcome Zoller! :hi:
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    Beginner screenwriters: LA or in NYC?

    I don't live in LA. However if I was younger, not married, had no kids/family, I'd move to LA. Entry level jobs in the industry are going to be local to the area there. Since I'm not older, married with kids, moving there isn't an option so I'm going to have to write amazing "can't ignore...
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    Total Newb

    Howdy! :hi:
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    movies What's the last film you watched? And rate it!

    Lost River 6/10 Pretty decent directorial debut for Gosling. The canvas he used of location, style, etc. was pretty good. Story was ok. Not terrible but not completely enthralling. Very much an "auteur" type film which makes sense since he wrote and directed it. Acting was good and he had...
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    Is this stunt easy or dangerous?

    Just take a mannequin, dress him up like the character, attach him to the crane... Drop him. Like a big version of this: Of course I'm kidding.
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    archived-videos A Bat Trapped In A House While It's Having It's Period (Animation)

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    archived-videos A Bat Trapped In A House While It's Having It's Period (Animation)

    Pretty decent. My only suggestion, get a female voice actor for the female. Was still good but I think the voice difference would have added a bit. Especially a female voice all sympathetic to the plight of the bat.
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    coverage Looking for feedback/coverage on my screenplay

    Welcome!
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    Another New Member

    Welcome! :hi:
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