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Oh I agree. I like your setup and heck I'd even like a kind of "red herring" thought that the guy who hits/kills the LEO is the main protagonist and then he's suddenly killed leaving people thinking WTF? Like he's a known drug addict (or some other thing that an influx of sudden cash would be...

Gillian Flynn of "Gone Girl" fame. The HBO series is moving so, so slowly...too slowly. I think it did need to be more than a movie but shouldn't have been anything more than 3 or 4 hour long episodes at best. It's 8 hours of Amy Adams driving around seeing things and drinking as much as it's...

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This has echos of "Sharp Objects"...except it's a female protagonist (journalist) investigating in her small town in MO (where her family owns the Big Farm/Slaughterhouse that employs half the town) the disappearance/murder of two girls. She becomes involved with the LEO from St. Louis assigned...

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Major rewrite. Brainstorming a couple of ideas and outlining at least one if not both. Reading/Learning and providing feedback to others.

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I think I read a short intro to this a few months ago? (maybe longer?) Is that correct? It's very "surreal". You posting "Escape from Tomorrow" above gives me a little bit of an understanding of the mindset of the type of narrative/film you are aiming for. What kind of feedback are you...

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Rewriting and outlining

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Thanks so much! You are right on. Now to get to fixing it.

The script is an interesting read. There are pictures in the script. Action blocks written in pyramid style (ie. Word, next line, word, word, next line, word, word, word, etc.). Lots of unfilmables and lists of things. A few pages were there's literally one line centered that grows in font each...

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That is some very high quality and impressive work. As a screenwriter, I aspire to have someone of your caliber behind the lens. Time with tell! Thanks for sharing your reels with us!

Got it. I was way off on my assessment of the characters. RIP Carla. :(

I liked the premise and the idea that these auto-uber like cars are going haywire or being used nefariously. There was a lot of detail given regarding the specific colors of the cars and the different "A" colors but I wasn't sure if that was just for painting the scene or whether the different...

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