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Sweet Virginia 7.5/10 Well done and directed low-budget crime drama. Pretty well acted. Interesting was reading the very heavy on page directed screenplay from the China Brothers and then how pretty much none of it was adopted from the page to the screen. The director used his own style and...

:thumbsup: I remember that one! Left an impression...or many spots of impression all over.

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More writing and rewriting.

Winchester 5/10 Nerve 6.5/10 First was very, very clunky for a ghost thriller horror. Second was ok for a PG-13 film. Interesting premise that went a bit "trying to be too clever" towards the end that really resulted in a bit of "shark jumping" messiness with hackers, etc.

The original and your new link are identical with zero changes.

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Arigato Mr. Roboto!

I haven't even heard of Sweet Virginia so I'll have to check it out.

IMHO to avoid the "3 Billboards" comparison, he finds her. Something along the lines of the Se7en ending (maybe not that emotionally charged) but they find a body, the LEO tries to put Dale's mind at ease that it might not be her, etc. Dale silently pulls out a photo of her and hands it to the...

Only way to find out? Write or outline the rest of it. Heck maybe he does in the first draft and doesn't in the second. Keep going and let us know how it progresses.

Initial thoughts. Really liked it. A couple of questions. Do we need to see the plane touch down? Do we need to see Meredith follow the plane to the pumps after she points that direction (I really don't know if it's self serve, prepay with cash, etc.)? There is a lot of dialogue and action...

It's a good thing if the transitions are natural and believable. Meaning natural for the scene that they are in and for the characters you've created. As an example, in Better Call Saul there is a character named Gus Fring. He's a deadly serious lethal antagonist. Part of his character is to...

Sent off a short episode. Wrote opening scene of one feature. Rewriting another.

Young Adult - 8/10 Good drama with an unlikable character. You end up hoping she fails and wakes up and she fails but...

And of course throw in a prostitute who hangs out in front of the Hotel who he doesn't pay for her "services" but she has the hook up/low down on the town, the cops (whom she knows both as an inmate and as a client). Isn't there a movie/tv show where that's the case? If not, there is now.

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