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Watch the overuse of the Wrylies - you direct the actors too much, and some of direction you give is pretty much a given. Also, try and watch your word choices - i.e. accoutrements. I've only heard this used when speaking about military stuff and maybe I am wrong but it just doesn't fit in...

Winter Break - 3/10 - awful...just awful Dead Girl Walking - 4/10 - great premise that fell flat

Hostel III - 4/10 - An awful film, not even as gory as I remember the first ones

Harmonica - why not just post somewhere so we can look and read it and tell you if it's done correctly?

I always share my ideas, because they are never good?

Among the notes I PM'ed, if I am not mistaken, I think that the gifts of clothes were to signify his homosexuality? If so, I think that you should rewrite this and, as Fantasy says, provide more background to give the (reader) audience a better insight into what his preference is.

Mutants - 7/10 - good cinematography and a typical, but interesting, look at the outbreak of a zombie virus. Had a couple of great shots that I truly enjoyed

The Change-Up - 6.5/10 - If Olivia Wilde was in more scenes, I probably would have rated it higher

Couple of quick thinkgs - Fantasy is right, it is hard to read like that. Some other things, some it read like you were writing prose instead of a screenplay and projecting an image. Also, be consistent with the use of Mister Devlin, Warden Devlin or Devling - it may sound like a nag, but it...

Police officers, sargeants or not, really only know about the "enforcement" of the law, not actual how the law works. If they did, they would be lawyers

I was always under the impression that most gangs don't alow anyone to get out? I mean, yeah there are a few here and there that make it out and become community activists but those are pretty few and far between. Also, are you using the dirty cop/gang member angle that is also part of "The...

White Irish Drinkers - 6/10 - basic film about the Bronx in the 70s

Puncture - 5/10 - basic story that misses a lot. Though I did like seeing downtown Houston on film.

I'm actually more of a fan of Jan Svankmajer's works: Alice http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095715/ Lesson Faust http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0109781/

something that would make Charles Bukowski or Hunter S. Thompson green with envy?

Cowboys and Aliens - 6.5/10 - mindless entertainment and explosions

Session 9 - 4/10 - awful, just awful...

The Stoning of Soraya M. - 8/10. Good story but, pretty brutal though

Children Underground - 8/10 - great documentary and was really surprised by some of the honesty from the (steo) parents No Strings Attached - 5/10 - it is what it is, had a couple good laughs from it The Nameless - 5/10 - kept falling asleep through it until something loud happened and then I...

Ok, I am not understanding what you are asking. Are you asking about what independent film was controversial AND a box office hit? If so, you have to define what you are talking about as a box office hit. Money in the area of Titanic? Or money in the area of Blair Witch? I would say that...