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  1. arrodiii

    Ending for a futuristic crime thriller... help!

    Reminds me of a mix of The Experience Machine and Strange Days with some modernity
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    Don't know if it's perfect or needs work.

    IMO it seems like the dialogue is forced. I have a few nitpicks on grammar and spelling, though it seems ineteresting
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    movies What's the last film you watched? And rate it!

    In your opinion... :)
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    Idea organizing

    Notebooks, but I also keep word docs/PDFs of everything. I usually also just jot all my ideas into emails that I send to myself, so I also have an email folder specific to each project that I am working on
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    movies What's the last film you watched? And rate it!

    Adrift - 5/10 - eh, a run of the mill female coming of age story. The saving grace was the location where it was set - will have to save up some money to visit.
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    What gives you inspiration to write?

    Alcohol
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    movies What's the last film you watched? And rate it!

    VHS - 6/10 - eh, didnt really do much for me - actually wish that there were some questions answered and wish that some of the "films" were actually better.
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    How should I write this court scenario?

    This is the reason why I am saying that H44 needs to do some research: In what judicial system can a party decline to be named in order to further their own interests at the expense of another party? And H44, I believe that Boston Legal mainly dealt with civil cases - totally different rules...
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    Writing a Thriller

    Kevin Bacon
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    How should I write this court scenario?

    Where is the story going to take place? What time frame? You already mentioned that you understand that Canada doesn't have a grand jury system (anymore...), so are you now going to write this during the time that Canada had a grand jury system or are you going to write this in current time in...
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    movies What's the last film you watched? And rate it!

    Skid Row - 7/10 - not a bad social commentary, though some points seemed to be pretty fake (or Pras was seriously delusional from his time on the streets) but still was good overall Troubled Water - 8.5/10 - a fantastic film that had been sitting in my Netflix queue forever (goes off after...
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    How should I write this court scenario?

    Are you a jurist or a lawyer? If not, then what you may be criticizing may be correct procedure. As AudioPostExpert has mentioned you need to do research, something that the people on this forum can not do for you or your script.
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    How should I write this court scenario?

    Depositions are not taken in courtrooms (at least in the US), they are usually taken in the attorney's offices - an agreement is reached between the parties prior to the deposition takes place through a discovery/case management order. As for the media, its your world - if they are interested...
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    Films about relationships

    Most of these aren't Rom-Com but other kinds of films about relationships Home is Where the Heart is Blue Valentine Annie Hall Manhattan Midnight in Paris (or pretty much any WA film) Serendipity 10 Things I Hate About You The Break-Up
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    The First Dialoque I've Written

    Reminded me of a poor attempt of a Tarantino rip-off
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    movies What's the last film you watched? And rate it!

    Craigslist Joe - 7/10 - some of the things seemed obviously staged but didn't really distract from what the experiment was about. Was interesting. Dear Zachary - 9.5/10 - I'm a sucker for true crime documentaries and since I never heard of this case, I was completely enthralled by this film...
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    Can anyone recommend me what camera to buy?

    Have alink to your film? Would love to see it
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    plot Having trouble believing in my plot.

    Yes and no. Read the comment sections in news articles and you will see how group mentality can turn on an issue. Thankfully these people are behind a computer, but it is, in a way, the same group think that I believe you are looking for.
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    movies What's the last film you watched? And rate it!

    Great Directors - 7.5/10 - was a good documentary and was interesting to hear them speak. I'm biased, but would've liked more Lynch and Linklater but was overall a good watch
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