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    critique I tried a new script; please, critique it

    It’’s really great that you keep writing these days. That is a huge step up from not writing at all to writing various short scripts. So keep at it. Now that you have overcome the first challenge ( writing) it’s time to do something about your formatting and writing a good script. I think...
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    The Academy Awards

    Yes, but you at least expect the most famous film award to be closer to solving this problem than any other film award in the world which obviously isnt the case. At this point cannes is a lot more credible in my opinion.
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    The Academy Awards

    Still, based on the rewards each year, it seems academy awards is thematically biased towards drama. This mentality should be somehow inhabited by the judges. Otherwise how do u explain the scarsity of some genres like crime or horror each year? Though I admit most of the horror movies these...
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    The Academy Awards

    Well that’s the whole point, the most prestigious film award should not be at all mixed with any sorts of politics. You can’t mix politics with any form of art and expect to get a good result.
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    Hey! new here, hobbyist

    It’s always nice to see another iranian here . Welcome
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    How "colourful" should the writing be?

    Subscribed.
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    The Academy Awards

    I remember myself talking about the rigged standards when I just joined this forum and everybody was so quick to attack me on this subject matter. Interesting how 5 months later people are whining about the pool of nominees. As directoric mentioned there just can’t be any awards for the best...
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    How Do You Feel About Twists?

    The fact that Dumbledore trusted him all the way through suggests that snape was a good guy against all odds. and there are quite a few scenes where snape helps harry before the big twist. and he was part of the order of the phoenix too where everybody trusted him. Having watched the series a...
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    How Do You Feel About Twists?

    It depends on your execution of the narrative. There is ambiguity in your narrative. In the form of a movie how do we know Jack thinks they have malicious motives? Is he narrating the story by V.O? Cause being approached by a group of people( specially with a woman among them ) doesn't look...
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    sound How to get a professional sound for a project for newcomers.

    Another beautiful guide! Thank you.
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    critique Critique my screenplay try

    Here guys , give this a try : https://www.dropbox.com/s/hnvbuwlk0dp7aqc/Screenplay.pdf?dl=0 All credit goes to Future Screen.
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    critique Critique my screenplay try

    I think it comes from the fact that she's been struggling for such a long time to write anything and now she finally has.
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    critique Critique my screenplay try

    There is no attachment option in PM. Follow my previous instructions or Indietalk's instructions. If you were still unable to convert it properly, send me your email address so I can attach the PDF for you.
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    critique Critique my screenplay try

    Also a second critique , Your script has an interesting premise. It has potential. But it's a bit vague. For example we never get a clear answer to why the Director has turned ? what happened to him ? Why has he become one of the victims himself? Or maybe he hasn't turned at all? Maybe he...
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    critique Critique my screenplay try

    In the bottom of your Celtx text there is a button called TypeSet/PDF, click on that . After you've clicked on that a new button on the top appears which is "save PDF" . Save that unto your desktop and then upload it.
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    critique Critique my screenplay try

    I have converted your script into an accessible PDF. I can send it to your email if you can't convert it into a readable format. Just let me know.
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    critique Critique my screenplay try

    Future-screen your PDF file can't be opened. PM me your email address I will send you a readable PDF of your script and you upload this PDF file.
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    My first project. "life station"

    Great job! I loved the train and the cross scenes. Although you didn't use any words I could still sense some sort of a story and some vivid emotions was portrayed through your shots in my opinion. Fantastic scores. In complete sync with your shots. Overall i think u did a fantastic job. I'm...
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    critique Critique my screenplay try

    I hope that's the case.
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    critique Critique my screenplay try

    Maybe I'm partly to blame. I didn't know she was struggling to write. Had I known she's been struggling for a long time, I would've written the vet in a more encouraging way. I think my original critique came out a bit harsh.
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