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Future - screen you are loosing the chance of people reading your script because of this Celtx format. Some have already shown interest in your script. Upload a PDF version of your script on Celtx site before people loose interest. There is an option in celtx app that allows you to convert your...

As I said she's written 3 pages.

I downloaded the script from her link then I opened it with my Celtx in desktop.

she has written 3 pages . U need to have the celtx app if u wanna open it.

Your script suffers from major grammatical errors to a point that they make your script unreadable. Both your dialogues and scene descriptions are nonsensical and unreadable. Either give your script to someone to edit it for you or write it in your own language and give it to someone to...

Well even if one day I will be able to direct this one it needs to go through a producer first. So I need to learn the standard script format. Now with that in mind is there a way I can write this specific scene without camera angles? All I want is that gradual revelation. I can work around...

Yes I've figured I do that. Can u please give me an example on " The camera moves back to reveal the rest of the room and the things the guy is looking at" without using the camera movement? Something that exactly shows what I'm going for here but without the camera movement. PS : This camera...

U r right. I guess that's one of the reasons I've decided to become a filmmaker rather than just a writer.

That's a good trick :thumbsup:

I know that's the responsibility of the director ,that's the problem! Directing is a form of story telling for itself. That camera moving further back to reveal the rest of the room or whatever the guy is looking at is part of that "Shock" or "Surprise" I want to show as an emotion. Without the...

For example a bunch of people are standing in a line facing something we can not see. Then the camera needs to track ( directing note ) on each of these individual's faces and show different expressions by each face. Or the camera is on a close up on somebody's face laughing at something we can...

Not all emotions can be described through dialogue. I've reached an impasse in which I want to show certain emotions through action sequences but if I intent to do so, I'll need detailed and elaborate scene descriptions ( with Directing notes like CU, Tracking,..). Which takes both a bulk of...

I think u need to elaborate more on why the couple need to "repair their relationship before it's too late" as it is a bit unusual to apply the "clock's ticking" scenario to relationships in need of repair.

For this high tech idea, have you watched the tv show " Maniac" ? It's exactly the same thing you are going for here. But since it is a tv show, it covers a lot more than just relationships. If you haven't watched it yet I suggest you give it a try. It may give u some ideas.

Or you could make it whenever they meet each other the dreams go away . and for some reason the dream has a stronger effect on both of them. So they are torn apart between choosing the dreamland to be together or the reality.

You could make them meet at the fairly beginnings of the story and the conflict can be the woman in the dream is identical to the one in reality but only in appearances, and her characteristics aren't at all like the ones he sees in his dreams. ( The same can go for the woman's conceptions of...

I don't understand why some people upload their content here and ask for feedback, then won't reply at all or post anything else. Many people have done that here. What are they hoping to get out of this? Are they mass promoting their content or are they looking for producers or funding, and when...

And right you are. I emailed them again asking who owns the recording rights. They haven't answered yet. Thank you for pointing out the sensitivity of the recording/master rights man! The whole reason I was so thick about it was the concept of "how does a composer using a music composing app...

The reason I ask this is because I know there isn't any remastered or remixes or reworks of these tracks. So it stands to reason that the recorders of these tracks are the writers/producers themselves.

Also you didn't answer me, isn't recording part of the "produced" right?