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I don't think I can fit that in, it would be too long. How do you think I should do it.

Wow... You are too high and mighty for me mate, your 'business' lmao.

Here are some different ideas (hopefully not hard to understand) -- In 1970’s Chicago, a troubled young man struggles through law school and fights to free the unjustly incarcerated Vietnam veteran who saved his life. A white law-student and a black vietnam vet form a barrier-breaking...

Here are some different ideas -- In 1970’s Chicago, a troubled young man struggles through law school and fights to free the unjustly incarcerated Vietnam veteran who saved his life. A white law-student and a black vietnam vet form a barrier-breaking friendship in 1970s’ America - until the...

you're only asking me questions, that's not feedback, it feels like you're attacking my ideas and not giving me advice or telling me how I can change my logline.

how are you helping? You're just berating me?

are u stupid? It means exactly what I said.

They are friends before, yes. The vet was more likely to be drafted because he was black. He is wrongfully incarcerated when he returns. THIS IS NOT A SYNOPSIS

no, ill just write my script in peace, thanks

THIS IS NOT A SYNOPSIS BRO

it is really not that hard to understand.

ARE YOU STUPID? obviously he doesnt try to free him for so long, he frees him long before that and the decades after are just hhis life after that, jesus.

Still not sure yet, was just very keen on that storyline, maybe I’ll just write two scripts 🤷

I hear you. The reason I don't want them to both be vets is because I want them to have distinct paths/stories but bond due to the similar minds/ thoughts they have and their ages ofc, not due to an experience in the army etc.

nononno i didnt mean that thats WHY he helped but... whatever, i dont know where that came from. Thanks for the help though.

Ok cool, I'm just not sure how I'll do that atm. Maybe the fact that they both feel like outcasts. Also I was thinking that the white guy is actually mixed race like in the end or something its reveale.. just as i write that it seems wild. This idea just really has me in a twist.

They bond after the vet returns from vietnam because of their distinct yet similar experiences with society. The black man was wrongfully incarcerated (70s), that is why he is a vietnam vet (he was more likely to be put into the war) (This is up closer to the top of the comment section.)

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Wdym? it has everything to do with it, thats the point?

They bond after the vet returns from vietnam because of their distinct yet similar experiences with society. The black man was wrongfully incarcerated (70s), that is why he is a vietnam vet (he was more likely to be put into the war)