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    Logline The Mafia threaten to murder the attorney general’s pregnant wife if he doesn’t assist them in smuggling 30 tons of a new wonder drug across the border from Mexico.
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    story So... I've come back with a new idea. What do you guys think?

    Maybe I will write it in the future.
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    story So... I've come back with a new idea. What do you guys think?

    Then again, I could always put that idea on the back burner.
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    logline What about this logline?

    After
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    story So... I've come back with a new idea. What do you guys think?

    I realised I didn't want to write it tbh. I'd rather spend my time with something more captivating for me.
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    movies Is this movie good?

    Yeah! Also, don't watch death proof... It's terrible.
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    story So... I've come back with a new idea. What do you guys think?

    Well obviously different divisions had different people and different rules/regulations. However there were certain squads that were extremely racist, as you would've read, this is just one of them.
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    story So... I've come back with a new idea. What do you guys think?

    No prob. I thought the same as you before I actually looked into it tbh.
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    story So... I've come back with a new idea. What do you guys think?

    Yeah, I think so too. One main tormenter and the rest are just jumping on the band wagon (cowards). The lieutenant is pretty much unhinged, almost like Kurtz in Apocalypse Now.
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    story So... I've come back with a new idea. What do you guys think?

    how about four? it's only because I want the lieutenant to be chasing them for a bit. Plus isn't there kind of a moral dilemma already there?
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    story So... I've come back with a new idea. What do you guys think?

    Clearly some didn't care about their families or they volunteered (like in Platoon).
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    story So... I've come back with a new idea. What do you guys think?

    Really??? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Military_history_of_African_Americans_in_the_Vietnam_War (Go to the discrimination bit)[/URL]
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    Just need to shorten this... A lot - During the Vietnam war, after a squads' retreat from the jungle, one soldier returns into the jungle to rescue his closest friend from captivity. Several years later the saviour is accused of murder. His comrade-turned-lawyer has since drifted away and now...
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    I had written like 5 pages, no biggie. Still trying to see how it will work. The final fifth of the script will likely be when the trial and so on occurs. The beginning will be made up of the story of the soldiers and as you said the circumstances that led to them forming a stronger bond than...
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    This has to be it right? A troubled lawyer deliberates whether to represent a veteran convicted for murder, the same soldier who went back into the jungle after his squad retreated to rescue the young man from the viet-cong during the war. Or A troubled lawyer fights to free a wrongfully...
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    okay
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    What about this? A law student fights to free an unjustly imprisoned Vietnam vet who, during the war, went back into the jungle after an evacuation to rescue him from the viet-cong.
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