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Generally I enjoyed this video. There are some ways to improve it. 1. Beginning shot was too long and not steady enough, maybe to apply more stabilization? 2. The bike was not shown enough in details, there were no bike close ups. 3. Inconsistency between various angles and shots. For example...

Yes, I agree. Beginning was interesting, had some "vibes". The story was unclear and not interesting, but video and audio were somewhat interesting. The beginning was better.

90s videos were very cinematic - meaning that they were shot, of course, 24 fps; secondly, they had great direction and editing, when there wasn't that many effects and plugins available as now - so they had to concentrate more on overall feeling and direction, rather than zoom transitions as...

Absolutely. When I was producing TV episode screenplays, typically consisting of 45 minutes of footage or about 30 scenes, I would first write 1 page treatment divided into 3 parts: beginning of the episode, middle part and ending of the episode. This allows very clear understanding of a story...

Hey, you don't have to send more pages. But either it is hard to have impression based on few scenes as well. It is good that you have that condensed outline. Good luck! For a feature movie with 60-80 scenes 2-3 page outline might be enough.

I think that you should summarize your story in 1 page before writing it in screenplay format. That would really help you to crystallize what you want to present. "The story is influenced by magnolia and American beauty. There are intertwining stories." - but I could not find what was the story...

I read the outline and actually liked it. There are some ways to improve it (just suggestions, really) 1. The leaving scene - it is actually great scene if written out well. Let me suggest how it should be redone - we see a not one scene, but a number of days (scenes) she prepares to leave -...

I was lost on "powerful pedophile ring" and stopped reading. I suggest reediting the details of the story (did not look into story itself as it seems like a quite usual one), but it is better if common sense prevails in those first lines.

OK I read first part of the script. I could not find much in terms of intrigue, at least on first pages. Story is confusing and it is not clear how all these characters are interconnected, the impression is that some random things happen here and there, in that town. Without understanding where...

1. As said, there are way too many flashbacks for first like 3 or 4 pages. On the second flashback I already felt lost. 2. The scenes have too many words, like in a novel. It is not cinematic description at all, doesn't read like a script. Repetitive description of blue eyes (how many times we...

it is a very nice and a professional looking MV

Yes, if script is very good, there are usually no significant changes (because rewriting is costly)

I forgot it was an indie production. This looks and sounds great and actors are good too. Trailer was full of tension and I forgot that this is not a Hollywood movie. What a great camera work! Audio was also great. Editing is superb.

A new TV series is coming out in mid-February based on our scenario. This is our second major TV production, first TV series with our script was aired in January last year.

Well, it is kinda edgy.

I would prefer to have some lighting on her when she is in the rooms and we can't see her face clearly. But other than that this is PERFECT video and the edit is awesome. The ending on the scene is so nice!! Great, great job!