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Cool, everyone. The last page is more of the advice I needed. I love the imagery but the sound is the weakness in regards to the whole film. I still submitted to a few festivals as is but if I get any selections, I'll tweak it some more. I submitted to Hollyshorts, Miami Short Film Fest and...

Congrats. Curious but don't some festivals you submitted to require the film not be put online? Is this just a trailer? I didn't watch before commenting. Hoping to share the smae news soon.

Maybe but it's cool and I am over it. It is what it is. It's not Hollywood quality but I did my damnedest.

Deactivated my facebook so maybe another time. Constructive criticism for improvement for my next go around. Just crapping on me is nothing I will stand for and I must believe in myself before anyone else does. So, that's just me.

I appreciate your insight and aid. What you did was be constructive. That's what I can take but there's a lot of elitist attitudes.

Sounds cool. Even an experiment have multiple directors shoot the same script and compare how they each come out.

Bravo but this a multiple location, well-executed, solidly funded feature. Mine is a one location, self-produced, self-financed, <7 minute short.

So, you have nothing to show? I asked for people to actually watch it not critique which I do not mind. Just come correct and be constructive.

Thanks! Something useful and insightful and simply nitpicking.

Jolly good show...

Interesting

Never knew all characters must be nice and dainty to be well-received. I, personally, want to watch you all's films. Show us, masters.

Okay. Pros. All I ask if someone post their trailer so i can gauge it against mines and she the shortcomings. Nope! Just a circle jerk.

Hour correlates with time. No grasp of the story. Fine! It's about getting the viewer to have interest in watching the film. A lot of trailers and advertisement do misdirection purposely. The sound is not an issue. The DP didn't even usmia boom mic because of space constraints or a camera...

Damn, I screwed up on that Taxi line but I used Past instead of Pass purposely. So, it was by design. Constructive criticism sounds more like nitpicking but I do it too so ehh. I can hear the dialog clearly over the phone so i can't take that critique seriously. It's finished now.

The trailer is nonlinear and it's about a former child star who no one wants to take a chance on possibly except this young, up and coming talent agent.

May you all actually watch it, please?

https://youtu.be/He92-VC4t54

Even Michael Jackson rehearsed and did talent shows. Lol

Cool. I'll go 30 seconds.