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  1. Constantin

    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    Yeah I struggled with that too, it was this or "Brothers Apart".. what do you mean "Lifetime" movie title?
  2. Constantin

    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    It is a fictional drama ... the biological mother was a homeless woman struck by a vehicle with a sordid history with a history of substance abuse. Her sole surviving twin is placed in foster care due to her being homeless and having a history of substance abuse. Even though She was clean during...
  3. Constantin

    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    Actually, I never really thought of it that way.. The inciting incident, as you have correctly identified, is part of an action sequence: In my story, one of the twins is the unwitting adopted son of a mob boss who only learns the truth that his only boy is not his biological son but the son...
  4. Constantin

    treatment ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment

    This is hilarious, ChatGPT got itself flagged for inappropriate content. Hahaha.. I continued the chat from ChatGPT's treatment ... This is how it responded ... OK, not very usable, but ChatGPT inspired my opening scene! I communicated my revised vision to ChatGPT ... I love this...
  5. Constantin

    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    Perhaps you can have multiple versions of a Logline ... For example, in Webtoons, they give the author a certain amount of room to describe the story and updates... I don't really like the example above, but you get the gist. In Netflix, you do not have that much room to describe the story...
  6. Constantin

    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    Ahh I see ... Reduce the story into those four bullet points, and wrap it up into a sentence or two. Nice
  7. Constantin

    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    Now that's pretty darn tight! I guess the question then becomes -- when is a logline too terse vs too verbose? Is there a happy medium ? Tight Tight... Yeah!!
  8. Constantin

    treatment ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment

    Well, yes and no ... In trying to determine its capabilities, I took an opening dialogue scene and described it over and over to ChatGPT with a tremendous amount of detail. The problem is it simply would not retain the information you corrected from a previous prompt; it would repeat the same...
  9. Constantin

    treatment ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment

    Yeah, I find it works better when you put large verbose chunks, rather than breaking it up into several smaller prompts
  10. Constantin

    treatment ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment

    I tried doing that with my twins story, but became frustrated. After I got the point across after constant refinement, it would revert back to its old habits and get confused...like it had a fit of amnesia or something ...
  11. Constantin

    treatment ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment

    Actually, it seems to get confused with the Rock character in the above synopsis, but I was interested to see where it would go with the treatment, which was less impressive ... Not how I would have planned the story, but again, this was an experiment .. lets see the other acts ... All in all...
  12. Constantin

    treatment ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment

    Yeah, totally agree. Let's see how ChatGPT deals with the Rock character...almost done...
  13. Constantin

    treatment ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment

    this prompt runs long ... so i break it down by character ...
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