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    critique Looking for feedback "Untitled Road Trip Film" (40 pages)

    This is my second screenplay I have written and this is the first draft. It's story i been kicking around, looking feedback on how i can improve the story. Sorry for typos and bad grammar, hope to fix that on the next drafts...
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    critique Feedback needed

    I guess writing really fast I don't catch many of my grammar mistakes. Thank you for the feedback.
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    critique Feedback needed

    The story is about a woman who treats her daughter who is a cheerleader in a inhumane way. I just want to see what people think, what needs to change, and what is good in my script.