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When a perfectionist college footballer is tasked with fostering his niece after his sister’s death, his new parenting role threatens to jeopardize his NFL dreams.
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The protagonist's name is Arthur and he had a very strong bond and close relationship with his late sister (the opposite with his older brother). They had an abusive father. The sister was the...
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A college football star's dream of turning pro is jeopardized when he's charged with the task of caring for his niece following his sister's tragic death.
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