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  1. OneiricVisuals

    screenplay Murder on I-15 (Short Film Screenplay)

    Thank you all. I got some work to do. Love the feedback
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    screenplay Murder on I-15 (Short Film Screenplay)

    "I won't get into the rest of it in detail... Just feels like the conversation is a little forced -- contrived. I get that THIS victim is NOT the usual victim. I get that but the dialogue feels a little too on the nose and not quite clever enough." Please give me more detail. Your giving me...
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    screenplay Murder on I-15 (Short Film Screenplay)

    I can do rewrites. What I met to say is that, I'm going to shoot this for two days. Filming starts in July, so if I need a complete rewrite, I will do it.
  4. OneiricVisuals

    screenplay Murder on I-15 (Short Film Screenplay)

    Hello, Need constructive criticisms. What changes do I need to make? The length is for budget reasons. We are filming this for two days. Genre: Comedy/Dark Pages: 7 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xMe5x9GWt1VvaFNY0KHJnU9Y9Bs_mD3v/view?usp=sharing Thanks
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    Hello All

    Hi, I'm just here to get feedback from my work about to share with all of you. Excited to be here
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