Recent content by Zaq

It does take place over the course of a few hours and is intercut with some flash back scenes.

All fair points here. I have a clear idea of the story but I'm struggling to break it down within a sentence, especially one that's concise and clear. You've pretty much nailed it Indietalk, although the fact that there was so much confusion leads me to believe that this logline belongs in the...

Logline: After a trifle argument over a clogged sink spirals toward a murder-suicide, a damaged couple must quickly find a way to repair their relationship before it’s too late. Hello guys, I'm just looking for any and all kinds of feedback to see if this logline sparks any interest at all...

It is more about the surviving friend-- the lies we tell ourselves to keep our world view alive. The first twenty minutes are set entirely in the bunker where we transition from not knowing who to believe-- to being almost certain that one of the friends is crazy and that there is no...

Thanks for the notes guys. That's a good point about giving away too much information. In regards to " a deadly stand off ensues", my thinking was that we don't know which one of the two characters is going to die so it might add an element of suspense. Also, the movie starts of inside the...

Hey guys, I'm looking for feedback on my Logline. I have three alternate versions and I'm trying to figure out which one is the most promising. Any comment or note would be much appreciated. "Two friends lock themselves in an underground bunker believing an apocalyptic attack to be imminent...