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To quote myself: Explanatory purposes. Everyone understands what I imply by putting his or her's universe in a parenthetical in the slugline, though that is not the professional way of doing it... The professional way is what I'm looking for, hence the purpose of this thread.

Ah ok, now I see, thanks! So basically you first show Michael's version of what happened, all of it, and then you show Rosanne's version. That's one way of doing it, but it's not the way I intend to tell the story. It makes sense from one perspective which is that it's much easier to write, but...

Do you refer to POV in the broader sense (of what actually happened according to each character), or POV as a shot description the way I used it? English is not my native language, what is an "undercut" in this context?

Where?

I certainly would! :yes: I'd love to know how to tackle this scenario.

Thanks directorik, glad I found my way here! I think I did a bad job explaining the way I intend this scene to be played out, my bad! Yeah, so this scene takes place at the same house, but at different times. The night and day scenario was just a way to simplify the explanation, but in the...

Hi, Currently writing a scene where we see two almost identical happenings experienced by two different people. We intercut between the two interpretations of what actually happened. Imagine two investigators showing up at a crime scene; imagine the mystery and suspense of what they're about to...