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I usually do as suggested, putting it away for a few days to give it a fresh look later.... SECONDARY SCENE HEADINGS seem like a good approach. I will try that out. Thank you!

Thank you for input. Please correct me if I'm wrong, but my understanding is that SERIES OF SHOTS and MONTAGE are used mainly to compress a number of scenes, for example to show passage of time. In may case, the interaction and dialogue between the characters during the walk is essential...

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I'm working on scenes consisting of a slow walking tour through a city. I started out with slug lines for every new street the characters turn into. That became quite busy, and not consistent with what I understand is current recommendations. I therefore limited the slug lines to only those...

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