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    Need feedback for the script.

    Well i just found this website a month ago and it's great to see how many people are there to converse with. Thank u for being so responsive :) ... i'll definitely make it. hope it gets articulated well on screen.
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    Need feedback for the script.

    Basically the kid: Faiz, is dead. And he is directing the person towards his own corpse. Faiz is calling out his own dead body as dog, which is a huge statement from kid's side. He doesn't expect anymore than that from the society he lives in.
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    Need feedback for the script.

    Need feedback for the story. Ok it's a short film but since it's my first, i want it to be really good, that's why i am posting the plot here. So, The film is called "FAIZ". I have to give some background to give u a perspective towards the story. "Faiz Ahmed Faiz", was a famous socialist poet...
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    Audio for my no budget short film.

    Okay i will, one hope is my university's media cage who are very cynical about lending equipments. If they do problem is solved. MAybe i have to go with my smart-phone's audio directly if they say no. Fingers crossed. Thanks for the advice :)
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    Audio for my no budget short film.

    https://www.amazon.co.uk/Rode-Smartlav-Lavalier-Microphone-Smartphone/dp/B00EO4A7L0 Will this help guys ? with smartphone, i have an s4, htc one and some others (no iphone). Will it be good shooting dialogues exterior?
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    Audio for my no budget short film.

    Ok when i say no budget i mean literally no budget. We are four friends making this 3-4 minute long short film with two actors and some 3,4 locations around the city with our 70d (50mm prime). The issue is the sound. I can't invest more than 50$ on audio. How to get it done? I just want...
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    Failure at writing a screenplay, whats the reason?

    Seriously? u just said: 'give up.' to someone who is just starting out, do u know me? To judge me like that. What an advice bro seriously.
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    Failure at writing a screenplay, whats the reason?

    Aspiring Mogul. I agree that i am starting out. I am already at film school, and my first year just ended, three more to go. I really hated the academic treatment of films. Something as basic as three act structure being taught. And i find it irritating because i already knew almost all of it...
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    Failure at writing a screenplay, whats the reason?

    Well.. admin, i knew that.. i asked for a solution, not a label to my problem.
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    Failure at writing a screenplay, whats the reason?

    Ok, i know it's a very broad thing to ask. No one can answer it without knowing me. Let me try, so it becomes more specific. I am 19 years old, i became a film buff after 15 and decided that i wanted to make films (write and direct). And.. after that for last 4 years i have been watching...
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