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    plot Lots of "beginning", lots of "middle" ... no "end"

    Even if they don't have big drama - big ideas, big dreams - doen't mean they don't have small routine drama. Every day is a challange and that is how you plot your script
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    critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

    Respect, bro
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    plot Lots of "beginning", lots of "middle" ... no "end"

    This might be unpopular, but you don't always need WHY, WHERE is enough. You construct the story depending on where you characters move. Like in sitcoms. What do they want? And how do they get there?
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    critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

    How can you build a scene if you don't understand the structure? That's why people write ten minutes of dialogue scene which has no obvious purpose and is boring.
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    critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

    Any answer
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    critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

    Do we have that in my "scene number one"?
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    critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

    Alright, lets break the scene down. I mean reservoir dog scene from above. Break it down )
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    critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

    Yes, you mean scene as one location, one period of time. I mean one scene, one conflict. I guess different schools
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    critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

    What's the character's status?
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    critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

    Sorry, third page
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    critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

    Second message, second page
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    critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

    Yes, i did.
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    critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

    Dude... imagine... you and me in a studio apartment. We own a money to a guy. Everything is happening in one location. We argue do we need to return the money. Door bell rings. We open and the man we owe money to enters. He beats the shit out of us, but we manage to kill him. Now we argue how to...
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