Recent content by shadowdragon20

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    watch I Want My Hat Back (Claymation)

    I did an experimental lip syncing piece in post production for this claymation. It's the first time I've ever done something like this so it's a bit rough. The animation is based off of the children's book I Want My Hat Back by Jon Klassen. If anyone has any feedback they could give me to...
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    watch Claymation Project Feedback

    This is my very first attempt at doing armature claymation. I had no prior experience nor taken any sort of classes for claymation. I basically thought it would be fun to do and went with it. I know there's a lot to learn about the medium so I thought with this video, I can give it a try and...
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    watch Rescue of the Enchanted Forest

    I don't believe there is a sure way to avoid clipping. I know because I encountered the same issues on a program similar to yours. If you've seen some of my projects using the program, you can tell that I had the same issues. The best advice I can give you to avoid clipping are limit the amount...
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    watch My Latest Short: Komorebi (sunlight filtered through tree leaves)

    I liked the camera work in your piece. I love the variations in depth of field and angles. You did a good job of capturing and framing your subjects. As for the "story" of your piece, I'm not entirely sure what it is about. I couldn't find the connection between the title of your piece and the...
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    watch Rescue of the Enchanted Forest

    By "clipping" I mean that you have things that go through each other such as hands going through the body of the character models or a small object of some sort going through another object.
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    watch Rescue of the Enchanted Forest

    First, I have a question: what engine are you doing this animation in? It looks very similar to the Half-Life 2 Engine that I did a few videos in when I was in school. As for the trailer itself, it's a bit too long for it to be a trailer. You have a pretty big dialogue and static scene towards...
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    watch Day To Night Time Lapse In Osaka, Japan

    I think it looks good. May I ask if this is an experimental piece to incorporate into a future project? I'm trying to figure out what kind of feedback you're looking for.
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    watch Starfox: Awakening |Live Action Fan Film - 4K|

    I absolutely enjoyed watching it! I would love to take lessons from you for visual effects. I've just started messing around visual effects to incorporate into my work. The only real "critique" I have is that some parts appear a little too dark, making it a little difficult to figure out what...
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    watch Robot Dance Animation Feedback

    Hey scoopicman, Thanks for the feedback. Actually, the scene is lit in a traditional 3-point lighting, a spotlight, a fill, and a back light. I also noticed everything you mentioned about the dumpster shine after it was rendered. I think part of the reason is that what I see on the screen was a...
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    Introducing Myself to This Community

    @Scoopicman - Thanks for the advice! I made a new thread for one of my videos in animation using the format you suggested. Hopefully, I'll get some feedback on that project! @mussonman - I can do a variety of animations. I started with computer animation and recently, I started doing claymation.
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    watch Robot Dance Animation Feedback

    Hi everyone, I'm currently planning on doing another computer animation project. Since I'm new to this site, I thought it'll be a good opportunity for me to get some feedback on my previous computer animation project I did. This way, I'll get an idea on what I can improve on or change on my...
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    Introducing Myself to This Community

    Hi everyone, I'm new here so I'm going to take a little time a introduce myself. I'm an amateur filmmaker that loves making videos for fun. I mostly do animation work but I do live film work too. I love doing a variety of mediums and expand my knowledge in the field. Since I'm an amateur, I...
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