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    critique Looking for some feedback - first 10 pages of my screenplay

    I'll check it out sometime, happy writing man.
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    critique Looking for some feedback - first 10 pages of my screenplay

    Hay man, read the excerpt your action lines are well written and the scenes seem to flow at a thriller pace. The dialogue is funny at times " fast car cos it’s falling off a cliff" is a good one but the voices do somewhat blend into one another, I'm a little worried the characters are missing a...
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    Hay there guys, girls I'm a fledgling scriptwriter, working on my second script looking forward to getting to know everyone.

    Hay there guys, girls I'm a fledgling scriptwriter, working on my second script looking forward to getting to know everyone and learning more about my passion.
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