It didn't suck but it wasn't good either. However the mood was well captured but you need to focus on these things:
*Lightning(as many have said)
*Takes(take many instead of one, i had that mistake before and it was f****** frustrating when i saw a terrible shot)
*Story and Ending(yours lacked...
Hi, my name is Samuel and i'm working my way towards my first serious short film. If you got tips on my film then you can PM me. I have nothing more to say other than Hi!