Recent content by Sam Hawkins

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    Black Comedy and Tongue-in-cheek

    try things like the office (uk version) or peep show, imbertweeners. It's normally things when you giggle at the character. It's like when vsomeone says something stupid and you dont want to laugh.
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    watch Feature The Screenwriting Detective

    I loved it. and i haven't said that about a film in a while. tell me if you ever need a runner for free or anything any time.
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    Too much suicide?

    suicide is all in all a bad idea. No one can relate to it. So yes defenatly too much. However 2 is probably the maximum. That is a rule the Shakespier kind of used thought his plays. 2 suicides were ok if the correlated with each other one is ok if it is for another reason but having 3 suicides...
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    watch Critics wanted: Bo "S.B." Schooler Clips

    The background need to be darker and more realistic. i don't understand why you edited it like that. It didn't seem like an interview. The actor was ok but was way to young so it didn't make any seance. However some of the script was quite funny but it was hard to concentrate because of all the...
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    Funding for A newbie?

    Hello, I’m new to this Filmmaking business. Well it’s hard not to be knew at things when your 16. I’m a trained actor who’s been in 50ish armature plays and is in county youth theatres and the like. But I wanted to try my hand at this film making, I have written a script (well a first draft)...
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    watch Hello! New short compared to "Clerks"

    I liked it. I would have plaid more on the aquardness but that wouldn’t have fitted well with your very American style.
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