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    Have any of you submitted a query letter or screenplay to agents and producers?

    It does. I've done the exact same thing after buying 10 pitches and using them. Now I just kook up all the contacts to query them without the middleman.
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    Have any of you submitted a query letter or screenplay to agents and producers?

    Yes, when I was a Nicholl's fellowship quarterfinalist a few years back I sent out hundreds upon hundreds. I got a bunch of responses which was honestly based on the Nicholls placing and not some great query I wrote. Honestly, you need to get that out of your head regarding "Who will respond How...
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    campaign Diverse Comic universe unlike anything out there seeks funding for its first animated film.

    I have a good friend originally from Trinidad who's an insanely talented artist and very creative. His comic company is starting to get a little buzz. I've come on to help him develop some stuff more in-depth and write TV and film scripts. The plan is for the first story in the visual medium to...
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    Percentages of Exiles screenplays

    Well this changes everything. I have to read this script right now.
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    Percentages of Exiles screenplays

    So what part of what you wrote here do you find the most exciting and think we should be excited about?
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    Percentages of Exiles screenplays

    First off, it's awesome you put so much work and creativity into this but no one cares. This is most likely going to turn people off from even bothering to read your screenplay(if there even is one). Now that you got all this down it's time to make a great screenplay. One that is not confusing...
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    Can someone review the first 60 pages of my Screenplay?

    I have several scripts, TV pilots and a specs I'm always looking for feedback on. I guess my Black Mirror spec is similar in length 59 pgs. I also haven't gotten much feedback on it yet. If you like PM me a link of yours and I'll do the same.
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    Script Swap

    Script swap Mine is 65 pages. Good People, Drama. A man returns to his hometown over a decade after being the suspected mastermind behind a large retail crime ring a changed man. But Local cops, a large private Detective firm and some other still have a grudge and unfinished business with him.
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    FEEDBACK REQUEST - "Stumptown" Mystery/Thriller

    Do you have a link? I'll read it and give you feedback it he next few days if you'll do the same for my 66 pg pilot.
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    interior, but seen from outside.

    I've used Int./EXT. or as final draft auto fills in I./E. mostly for car type scenes. I think that works best.
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