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Do you have plans to write something original? everyones burning question...:deal:

Thanks for all the advice...new logline After learning the emancipation of 4 million slaves is not going as planned, President Abraham Lincoln creates the Freedmen's Bureau to aid in their transition to Americans and fight the brutality of the newly formed Ku Klux Klan. @indietalk....love the...

After learning the emancipation of 4 million slaves is not going as planned, President Abraham Lincoln creates the Freedmen's Bureau in 1865 to aid in their transition to Americans and fight the brutality of the newly formed Ku Klux Klan in post-Civil War American South. here is the first one...

Yeah....micster..but if the story is great the "The Franchise" might want the idea...How about this one though EddieNES, write more...200 extra pages gets you 10 one hour episodes...or a trilogy...ijs

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GURUUUUUU!!! [/COLOR][/COLOR][/U][/B] Thanks directorik...this is the true feedback we all need.....not the suggestion of Knowledge but the truth every time...thanks again. I am in the "final" rewrite before a submission to the HBo aCCESS competition...I have a great idea for a 60 min drama...

In the golden age of Egypt, Akhenaten and Nefertiti struggle with self identity, a Queen's ambition to keep the royal bloodline in tact, deception in the palace and the priest of Karnak that do not want his reign to succeed before his crowning in 6 days. Thanks...we are gonna get there...lol...

The whole of Egypt mourns his death. EGYPT “Let 10,000 men die before our Magnificent PHARAOH!” INT. KARNAK TEMPLE -DAY - MOMENTS LATER Karnak Temple, more than two thousand feet in length and one thousand feet in width with living quarters throughout, is slightly smaller than the Pharaohs...

Logline critiques...EGYPTIAN GOLD In the golden age of civilization, shaped by his unrelenting mother, an unconventional prince and princess are propelled to the throne to preserve the palace and royal bloodline, against the greed of nations that do not want his reign to begin.

Thanks for all the advice... I understand..let's make it a logline In the golden age of civilization, shaped by his unrelenting mother, an unconventional prince and princess are propelled to the throne to preserve the palace and royal bloodline, against the greed of nations that do not want his...

In the golden age of Egypt, Akhenaten and Nefertiti struggle with self identity, A Queens ambition to keep the royal bloodline in tact, a divide in the palace and the priest of Karnak that do not want his reign to succeed before his crowning in 6 days. EGYPTIAN GOLD

An aspiring screenwriter must find the bridge that leads from his imagination to the land of dreams before time runs out.