Recent content by ljgrohn

Nice job! I liked the dialog a lot. It really show cased the personality of the characters well. A couple things that felt a little off were: 1- The readiness of the boyfriend to give up. He went from ready to physically fight for her (granted men can sometimes be this way for no reason) to...

I don't know what the appropriate response is, but if you look at a movie like the Big Short, the writers put in music all the way through. They used this format: "MUSIC: Some great 70’s ballad like KISS YOU ALL OVER by EXILE".

Am I Too Late?! Would love to read the rest of the script.