Recent content by joey1986

Again, the link works fine but I went in made another using dropbox. Here is another link https://www.dropbox.com/s/pkubfnpemprrb9w/Script%20bully%20%2816%29.pdf?dl=0 Also, you can scan the url for viruses, it's clean. Here is a site you can use to scan it. https://www.virustotal.com/ or...

You must of download something else bro, its google drive. Works perfectly fine for me and a friend i sent it to. https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8UX3D6AhyWfSThneDBOLUhiQm8/view?usp=sharing

Open perfectly fine for me not sure what you're experiencing.

I should've probably mentioned this is a short film, that I'm writing for a friend. And yes it will be your everyday cliche. :( Here is a bit more I wrote tonight, I didn't proofread it all yet, so there will most likely be a lot of errors...

How about "Cake Solved" or Cake Closed. Maybe even "Private I-cing".

Thanks! Ill go back and make the fixes.

Did you see anything I could, approve on further?

I'll consider that if my brain decides, it can no longer learn. Ok, here is the re-write let me know what I'm still lacking at, thanks. https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8UX3D6AhyWfSThneDBOLUhiQm8/view?usp=sharing

Can someone tell me if I'm on the right track, please! I have been learning about punctuation for a couple days now and I think I had a moment of clarity. Please tell me if this is correct thanks. A swarm of teens huddles together in a circle, They clamor*for blood. In the center of the...

California education system sucks! I'm glad you're able to function with your disability. For me it's complicated. I can only focus for like 3 minutes before I zone out lol Didn't mean to make excuses It's just hard for me to learn when I have no idea what to look for. btw no need give me...

Sadly yes :( But I have an excuse lol I have a learning disability. It has kept me back for years, well that and a failed education system...

I agree with you 100 percent. I don't care for scripts like this, I'm only writing it as a favor for a friend.

I'm trying to learn. I made some fixes probably made more mistakes :(

If you have a chance mad hatter can you point out what I did wrong so i can learn how to fix it?

sorry about that, as you can see i'm not very smart lol ill fix it tonight and repost the link