Sorry for the delayed response! I realized I pasted in one of my older loglines - I updated it in the OP so please let me know if this one provides a better since of the story (or if it is still unclear).
Thanks so much!
I know it's a long script (118!), so thank you to whoever takes the time to read through it (or part of it). Appreciate any and all notes, as well as suggestions on what I should do next!
I've also attached the opening scenes (12 pages) as a separate document for those who don't want to download...
I found this website while researching ways that I can promote/get feedback on my novel-to-film adaptation. I'm excited by the prospect of receiving notes on my adaptation, as well as being able to give feedback on other writers' projects! I'm hopeful that I'll be able to connect with a number...