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Recent content by DavidIanHart

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    Feedback on comedy script

    Prank Wars Opening (Int.) -Opens on shot of Evan & David playing games on the couch from neck down with animated text. 'Two friends' -Shot of UFC style face off from nose up. 'One war' Cut to David texting. Evan approaches. "You've got something on your shirt" Evan says before a go pro shot of...
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    archived-videos Only, A short based on Fredric Brown's "Knock"

    Honestly, I had no filter to use, but from a story perspective I look at it like this. He doesn't really need it. It's kind of like having a security blanket; it makes him feel safer. He's still breathing the air, he's still getting sick. I left it open, if not too much, and I think I'm going to...
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    archived-videos Only, A short based on Fredric Brown's "Knock"

    The last man on Earth sat in a room alone. There was a knock at the door. The first time I read that short horror story, I got chills and inspiration. This is my first short of 2015. I literally shot this all myself with a tripod, so for what it is, I'm happy with it. I'd love some feedback and...
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