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    Excerpt from current script - Feedback?

    Hey man, I'm gonna be as honest as I can. I should let you know that I'm tired, and not fit to do this, but whatever. I can't say I enjoyed it very much. The description at the start was clunky and hard to follow, much less visualise. Perhaps it's the sleep depravation, but I have trouble...
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    Need Help on Short Film Script - Green Day

    That's really him folks. Identity confirmed.
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    Need Help on Short Film Script - Green Day

    Hi. Here's the script my friend wrote: https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B0XZd-PXmoRrRW02Ukh2SzVaS0k It's called Green Day. He doesn't have an account so I'm posting it on his behalf. It's pretty good in my opinion. I did the conversion to screenwriting format, so any grammatical gripes are...
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    Need some help with short film script

    Haha, both of you?! It must be an Aussie thing, 'cause my friends didn't even notice. It's something I hear a lot, it seems natural to me. It's casual. And what I'm trying to get across is Luke talking down to Dylan, demeaning him. I don't want Luke to be genuinely friendly. And here's a copy...
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    Need some help with short film script

    https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B0XZd-PXmoRrMDFLSzJCbTRjN2M There's the link to my first revision based on your collective feedback. If you're interested in reading it, how've I done this time? Have I made an improvement or have I messed this up horribly? Any further opinions would be greatly...
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    I need help with this short script: The Custodian of Time

    Haha, by hypocrisy I meant I was doing the same thing. Nothing on you. Sorry for being so insecure. I'm normally hated on when I critique. Just a reflex to keep putting in disclaimers.
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    I need help with this short script: The Custodian of Time

    I'm going to serve it pitch black, I hope this is really what you want. And I'm no professional as you know. Please don't take me too seriously. I can't really say I liked it. It reminds me heavily of other films and literature. I'm thinking of the film called Looper coming out later this year...
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    Need some help with short film script

    CourtneyLauren90, yeah, I started writing in short story format so I've had to grow out of it. I'm getting better though! Thanks for your input. Budget:0, Nolan'd be proud. fernando97echeverria, thanks. For some reason Celtx won't underscore, or at least when I've tried, so I did bold. I...
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    Need some help with short film script

    Holy mother, a lot happened since yesterday. Thank you all, jesus. alexwhitmer, my god you have really helped me out here. Everything you said was so correct and on the dot. Yes, I totally agree that correct formatting is a very good thing. And your points on my story are very true. I'm...
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    Need some help with short film script

    Thanks Gabe. I'm thinking I need to figure out a good reason. I can't just pull a rabbit out of the hat. I need a set up. I'm thinking that maybe I could do something along the lines of some pattern of death, admittedly kind of like this short animated film: https://vimeo.com/9178331 So...
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    Need some help with short film script

    This is really giving me something to think about. I'm going to go back to my lair and think. Thank you very much.
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    Need some help with short film script

    Thank you very much Budget:0. You make great points, and I hope you won't get annoyed if I try to defend myself. People tend to get annoyed. I realise now that I totally stuffed up parts of the ending. Before this draft both Dylan and Harrison have guns, but I realised that didn't make sense...
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    Need some help with short film script

    Hey, I posted this here a while ago and the shoot still hasn't happened. After getting all blocked up with my feature script - I kept false starting - I went back to it, and ended up making some big changes. Now I don't know what to think of it. Hopefully I'll finally get it shot some time soon...
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    Is a Canon 550D the best you can get for £500?

    Like Ewan says, it's broad. But if you're looking for basics I'd recommend Vimeo Video School. They put out some great videos, which makes sense given the name.
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    Is a Canon 550D the best you can get for £500?

    I'm not sure if it's the only option, but it's a bloody good one. I love my 550D, for photography and for video. The quality is amazing. But to get the most out of it you'll be needing a decent lens. I don't have this yet, and it's killing me. The 18-55 kit lens is very low quality. One thing...
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