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Constantin reacted to Unknown Screenwriter's post in the thread critique Feedback - Plot Development for a Love Short Story with
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Let me ALSO say here that it's REFRESHING to SEE someone taking critiques like this so well. Gotta tell ya... I've tried to help MANY a... -
Constantin replied to the thread critique Feedback - Plot Development for a Love Short Story.Haha no problemo :)
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Constantin replied to the thread critique Feedback - Plot Development for a Love Short Story.Yes, that's the idea of reuniting them later...they are so consumed by the fear that they forgot how to live... the old couple is...
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Constantin replied to the thread critique Feedback - Plot Development for a Love Short Story.As mentioned scenes are misplaced and formatting is a problem .. I will deal with that later...it doesn't change the story which is what...
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Constantin replied to the thread critique Feedback - Plot Development for a Love Short Story.Thanks for the awesome feedback ... I am well on my way with a major rewrite: To your points: 1) I will add a scene prior to him...
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Constantin reacted to Unknown Screenwriter's post in the thread critique Feedback - Plot Development for a Love Short Story with Like.
1) First thing that doesn't feel right to me is why are we watching Robert drive his car? Is he LOOKING for a yard sale? Is this what he...
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Constantin replied to the thread critique Feedback - Plot Development for a Love Short Story.I thought about adding a scene before he comes into the yard sale: Muriel is painting outside the nursing home and her son visits him...
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I utilize two types of loglines... The first, which I call my COMPASS OUTLINE, is what I create to KEEP me ON TRACK with the STORY...
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Constantin posted the thread critique Feedback - Plot Development for a Love Short Story in Screenwriting.Hello friends, I am writing an original short story and would love some feedback. I know the formatting needs work, and the scenes are...
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Constantin reacted to Unknown Screenwriter's post in the thread format Science Fiction Screenplay - A Short Story with Like.
Well it's all in the rearview mirror now... Lessons learned!
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Constantin replied to the thread format Science Fiction Screenplay - A Short Story.Just reading your posts brings me back to that terrible time. She used the strategy of wearing me down and it worked. There's literally...
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Constantin replied to the thread format Science Fiction Screenplay - A Short Story.Thanks! They say we can tolerate (at most) a couple of bad things happening at once, but when too many problems start to compound, the...
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Constantin replied to the thread format Science Fiction Screenplay - A Short Story.My heart goes out to you, my friend. I too went through a difficult period a few years ago when my ex re-married and moved our daughter...
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Constantin replied to the thread format Science Fiction Screenplay - A Short Story.Amazing ... Do you have any personal YouTube channel or something like this with online tutorials?