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    watch First 2 Short Films

    "The Beginning of the End" The coloring was too contrasted. but the biggest issue was the lack of story. Who was he? Villain? Hero? What satisfaction did I get from watching it? "The Cure" This was better. Coloring could use some work. The story was better. Your audio needs to be louder, I had...
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    watch 'Radio Service'

    Needs Story The visuals were awesome. Awesome, awesome camera work. But there was no story. Who is the guy? What is the time period? What was he looking for? What did he find? How did the character develop? It lacked an answer to all those.
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    watch 'teleportas' / a short film

    Needs Visuals The reason, I suspect that you have had no responses is because you need you need to put more effort in. A filmmaker takes a story and shows the viewer what he wants them to see. Your work is more like a book in the fact that you did not show the viewer what you wanted them to...
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    Plugins gone

    I was working on a project when I left for the weekend. When I returned Element 3D and the Saber plugin couldn't be found by After Effects. I am not seeming to be able to find them on my computer either. Thoughts?
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    watch SHORT TAKES - a little cinema history... quickly

    Do you do all the editing and Cinema yourself?
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    watch SHORT TAKES - a little cinema history... quickly

    Really Awesome! I loved it. Are you going to continue making more?
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    watch Which Showreel and Critique

    I diffidently like the first one best. Its shows more of what you do. The second one was like, thats all of it? But I was pleased at the end of the first one. Btw Nice work :) You also might consider putting all of your work on a CD so they can view each work separately. Like put a full length...
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    watch 35sec Long Short Film - Ejiki

    Its really how you do it. My first short film was done this way. 100% alone. But there was a scene where I was running with camera out to my side filming my face, and it the most popular scene. Everyone was curious about how I did it, and it had no digital pans. But I liked it. I was kinda...
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    watch I met myself

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    watch I met myself

    Boy im thirsty now....lol....I liked the idea.....interesting concept. I wish it had come to a more blatant ending though. You could tell there where two of the same people in the house but I didnt know for sure. also at the end I personally felt as if something Drastic should have happened. But...
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    watch Into the Wild Scene Remake

    Here is a film I made in 5 days, it is for Film Riots Monday Challenge. I had some issues with quality, Im not quite sure but I used Magic Bullet Looks and think they might have been a bit heavy and reduced quality. So if you guys know of a thread on rendering tips I love to know where it is. I...
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    watch Bed Time Story

    One thing is I would try different camera angles. It really helps move things along. The lighting was nice, In dark scenes it is good to have a contrasted look, like a cold bluish light to the left, and a small warm light to the right and an overall cold ambient.
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    watch Mexican Standoff

    Here is a film I did to practice my animating skills, so critique away! Sorry not animating..lol SFX https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZZRluMjtKKg
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    watch The Things We've Seen

    Good job! I liked your dialogue shots. Good emotions in your actors too. Would be cool to see the whole film! So what is the outline of what happened there? A kid apparently went to a crime scene?
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    How to get the Lighting I want

    Film riot has tons of good stuff! They have tuts on high budget and low budget. So since I don't exactly know what you need I sent a link with tons of stuff. https://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&rlz=1C1EODB_enUS531US537&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=film+riot+lighting&tbm=vid
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