james76

When one character is talking to a specific character within a group. How is that done?
On another forum it was suggested to be done like this.

John

(to jake)

What are you drinking?

That seems awkward and like too many spaces to me.

Appreciate any advice

Have any of you ever had to indicate that a character is looking through a peephole? I just put PEEPHOLE POV., and then described whats happening on the other side of the door. Is there a better way?

Sorry if you've seen this question already. Still learning how to use the site.