The General Line

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A short film about a landlord attempting to push his tenant into buying the apartment building from him. like, comment, share, subscribe, and ring the bell. ...
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Short
Genre
Drama
I thought you did great acting out the parts. I'm assuming this was all done by you, the acting, the filming, the script. If that is the case, very nice job!

The lighting was really dark, get more lights involved in your production.

I thought the digital zoom pan was a bad idea, and I can't tell if it was my internet or your video, but it glitched around the curtain opening part. Right around when you did the digital zoom pan.

There were some cool shots in there though. The opening shot with the door was interesting. And the red light behind the Landlord was moody and neat.

The dialogue was interesting enough to sit through. All in all, great effort, especially if you were on your own.
 
I thought you did great acting out the parts. I'm assuming this was all done by you, the acting, the filming, the script. If that is the case, very nice job!

The lighting was really dark, get more lights involved in your production.

I thought the digital zoom pan was a bad idea, and I can't tell if it was my internet or your video, but it glitched around the curtain opening part. Right around when you did the digital zoom pan.

There were some cool shots in there though. The opening shot with the door was interesting. And the red light behind the Landlord was moody and neat.

The dialogue was interesting enough to sit through. All in all, great effort, especially if you were on your own.
Thank you so much for watching!

I was by myself for everything. I want to try and build up my skills a bit before I start working with others.

I really appreciate the critiques and I'll definitely work hard to get better.
 
Thank you so much for watching!

I was by myself for everything. I want to try and build up my skills a bit before I start working with others.

I really appreciate the critiques and I'll definitely work hard to get better.
Well you've done a great job on your own. If you can direct yourself, you can direct most people, so you are on your way!
 

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