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Old 04-16-2019, 03:35 PM   #1
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How to format quick flashes in a screenplay?

Question : In my screenplay, the main character occasional suffers quick flashes, like visions. I have been unable to assert if I am formatting these correctly. Please also note the single and double line spaces, where I have tagged my 'QUICK FLASH' and 'BACK TO SCENE's as Scene Headings in my software (Amazon Storywriter). Am I doing everything correctly?

My current sample :



Bob slowly averts his eyes towards the trees.


QUICK FLASH

Hands bend a thick rope into a loop.


BACK TO SCENE

Eyes down again. Grimaces. Finds the courage to return his gaze.


QUICK FLASH

A noose sways in the breeze. Heavy off-beat BREATHING.


BACK TO SCENE

Head down. Winces.
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Looks fine to me.
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