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    critique Feedback needed for opening scene of my newest Screenplay.

    I've wrote a couple practice screenplays and now I wanna turn this one into a feature length screenplay. I'm pretty happy as a writer with this first draft of the opening scene but I need feedback from people with more experience and knowledge than me. Don't be afraid to tell me if it's utterly...
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    music Tell me if my soundtrack is too outdated and overused

    I'm currently writing a screenplay that I plan to film about 2 Teenagers on a road trip to meet one's favorite celebrity. It's gonna be funny, but also sentimental and sweet. I want it to have an early 2000s feel but I don't want it to seem dated if that makes sense. I put together a list of...
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    critique I really need feedback on my screenplay. It's only a few pages

    Okay so I posted the first version of this screenplay awhile back and it was utterly panned. I went back through and rewrote about 80% of it and honestly think it's much better now but still need feedback. This is the first screenplay I ever wrote so I'm still not entirely sure what I'm doing...
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    critique "On a Whim" (4 Pages) - Screenplay - Feedback much much needed

    I just finished a very rough first draft of my ever screenplay. I wanted it to be something simple, so I decided to have the entirety set in a fast food restaurant. Now that I finished I feel it definitely needs work and to be polished but as somebody new to screenplays I don't exactly know what...
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    Hello! I'm new here and writing my Welcome post

    My name is Andrew but I go by Ronin to most people. I've been obsessed with movies since I was about 4 and always dreamed of making my own. Growing up I had insane abilities to write stories of all kinds and always did in my spare time. As I got older I lost my ability and I'm really trying to...
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