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Logline: A runaway fends for his life against supernatural forces who seek to eliminate him before he can achieve his destiny. Link to script:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VUqvTiS1xxtH0GwAOQujkX27Txa4Eq4_/view?usp=sharing 1. Do I have a clear conflict? 2...

I've written and created one short film in 2018 - since then life and work have got in the way(became a teacher during the pandemic so lots of my free time was taken up but looking to use my time better). I am trying to get back on track pursuing this dream as its a new year but my questions to...

Link to Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1erHMq1cDGX9xZyTx1Z7bx6BP_ycaO_G-/view?usp=sharing So I feel pretty pleased with this first draft I wrote, I think the storyline is interesting. LOGLINE: When a young man sees his mother killed by a member of the notorious Roundtable, he will stop...

So I've decided to try and write a feature film (1 hr 30 mins) and I'd appreciate feedback on what I have written so far. LOGLINE: A cautious librarian and his best friend are forced to work with the Resistance, after being involved in a car chase lead by their charismatic leader, a loud and...

Logline: A leader of a criminal organisation realises that he has fallen for the wrong woman, his best friend's girlfriend. Link to the script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1c_2ZaIdpMPF_buaBbZzu4JIzR0viTIPP/view?usp=sharing Would really appreciate feedback on the following: Do I have a...

Would really appreciate feedback about the following: Is the plot small enough for a small short film or are there too many moving parts? Are the characters interesting? How can I make them better? How can I improve my dialogue? What are your thoughts on my action lines? Does my story have...

FEEDBACK Took a writing hiatus of two/three months but decided to get back on the saddle by doing short bursts and eventually finished this short film screenplay. Would really appreciate feedback on what I've written? Its intended to be a low budget short film but I was wondering about the...

So as a basis for the short film I'm writing, its about a young man who disguises himself as an electrician to infiltrate the house of the politician he feels is responsible for his wife's disappearance - my main problem is how to communicate her disappearance seeing as she is vanished from...

I have this idea for an animated short film but I am not an animator - is it worth sinking time into this if I want to be a writer/director or am I bet off working on something that I can actually produce physical work in the form of a film? At the moment, I've made one short film and two...

Trying to figure out how to write a scene where two characters are hiding behind a couch, whilst two other characters are being interrogated. Would really appreciate feedback as I'm nearing the end of Act 1 (I'm 22 pages deep on my first draft) and want to ensure I am writing better going...

Hi all, I am looking for feedback on the first 14 pages of my sci fi pilot. Mainly, I am curious to know: Have I got an interesting story thus far in your opinion? Do I introduce the world or have I overdone it? Have I successfully teased the theme thus far? Link to script...

Would love to have feedback on this pilot. Logline: A young bully is dragged into a global conflict where earth battles against an otherworldly force after a series of asteroids fall on every continent in the world. Link to script...

I'm an aspiring writer from London. I like writing drama and love the sci fi/superhero genre.