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    critique 5 page Script

    My biggest concern is implying that an animal died. You'll understand more once you read it. The animal dying would be off screen, at least that's how I envisioned it.
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    critique First Ten

    The intro to a 40 page script. Thanks!
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    story Advice about pitching

    I'm in a feature writing class, I have to pitch to my class and here's my concept: Nurse Irene is an average single mom neck deep in debt, with a disabled son and a girlfriend who’s married to a man. She’s played it safe her whole life and has nothing to show for it. While tending to the wounds...
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    critique First 15 pages of Feature

    Story is about a woman coming into her own after the death of her child, abandoning her responsibilities as a mother and confronting the man who led to her sons death. Looking for any critique that doesn't focus on errors of formatting.
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    critique Super Short

    Super Short Idea. Thoughts?
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    critique 30 page script. Disclamier: topic of suicide and death examined.

    I'm getting ready to submit to a festival, there are a few typos. How else can I clean it up ? Thanks Also it's not a TV Pilot...anymore
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    website Drone Instagram

    dust_and_scratches
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    critique First 6 Pages of my script -Pulling Weeds

    Does the set up create intrigue? Is there anything that is off? I care less about grammatical stuff
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    streaming What are you watching rn?

    I am going to throw out some of my recent favorites: Portrait of a lady on fire (hulu) A serious man (Netflix) The road to perdition (Netflix) West World (HBO series) What are some recommendations?
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    critique Short Script Feedback

    Is there any weak points? Is the ending rushed?
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    Welcome

    Looking for feedback on some of my work before I submit to festivals. Also up to talk film and Tv.
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