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Should this be "a" psychological battle?
Also, blur seems counterintuitive here, "one terrifying truth" sounds absolute. Perhaps terrifying could change to unimaginable. A bit more ominous.
...he spirals into a psychological battle where guilt, identity, and reality blur into the unimaginable...
Tell us more about the MC:
An introverted young man...
wakes up in:
awakens in...
Tell us more about the motel:
a cheap motel...
and no memory:
with no memory...
I could keep going but my point is, tell us more without using a lot of words and try to maintain a nice flow.
Oh it's the first thing I noticed. It was ever so slight but created a groove. It has to be set just right to create that head bobbing grove, and it has to be undetectable (so to speak), otherwise it can look/sound like a mistake. Bravo!